   JupLuna 4/2/02 . chapter 7this is a really cool story...i love Trunks/Mako together...::sigh to be able to fly...oh sorry went off in my own world, hehe |
| Jupiter's Light 3/20/02 . chapter 7 SWEET! WRITE MORE ASAP! And Please Get Makoto And Trunks Back Together! |
| LISA 1/31/02 . chapter 6 Break up? ! You must give me the next chapter, I have got to know what happens next! |
| NeoSailorJupiter1 1/29/02 . chapter 6 Write more soon Please |
| Jupiter's Light 1/28/02 . chapter 6 SWEET! Write more soon Please? This Is soooo S-w-e-e-t! Is makoto Gonna Go SSJ (Super sailor Jupiter)On Them and Blast The bad guys to King-dom-Come? (A Thing my friend Says) I WANNA KNOW! SOO PLEASE WRITE MORE A.S.A.P.! |
| Kaji Batou 12/19/01 . chapter 4 More! please put out another chapter soon! and, i know you probably get this alot, but Marron is how you spell it.- |
| Lisa 12/16/01 . chapter 4 Okay, we know more about the bad guys, but you should really make your chapters just a bit longer. You must write, I want to see what's wrong with Lita, they're such a cute couple. |
| kitten or shinotanshi to lazy to sign in 12/16/01 . chapter 4 -.-(kitten) says Could it be... King colds Other son/daughter? o.O hmmm ill have to wait and see .. |
| Destiny 12/16/01 . chapter 4 i love it ! write more soon |
| Jupiter's Light 12/15/01 . chapter 4 Do More Soon! I LOVE IT! |
| Kobacha-Chan 12/14/01 . chapter 4 it was well put, but what does the story mean? |
| Altheia 11/13/01 . chapter 3 Cool! More please! |
| Sirena Farren 11/13/01 . chapter 3 Frieza? I mean, that's Marai Trunks, but still... |
| Kojiro Takamashi 10/31/01 . chapter 2 not bad, only the Z warriors don't teleport. They move really fast with a method called the Zanzoken. FYI |
| Lisa 10/24/01 . chapter 2 TRUNKS AND MAKO WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! DoN't leave me hangin like that, write more. It's so funny how they tease each other! Like I said write more! |
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