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| Michaiah 2008-09-10 ch 6,  | abuseWhat IS Calvin's last name? o_o |
| MCpooky 2008-09-07 ch 6, | abuseNice idea to make joe Susie's uncle. |
| MCpooky 2008-08-31 ch 5, | abuseYou should really get chapter 6 out. |
| MCpooky 2008-08-10 ch 1, | abuseExcellent!!(This is Claire BTW). Come out with the new chapter soon. |
| Ignominion 2008-07-15 ch 5, | abuseAwesome! But maybe you should introduce some sort of recurring villain, and maybe give them some sort of other companion. I'm just saying... |
| Popping Fresh 2008-07-08 ch 5, | abusewow... this story is a GREAT concept... but honestly... everything is working out too well for them. there is virtually NO conflict and it gets boring after a while. nobody is supposed to see hobbes, and if somebody does, he turns into a stuffed-animal. There is no more monetary problems, like the yukon arc. Plus, at the beginning, where did the 100 dollars at the beginning come from? C and H should fight, go into debt, get chased, or something exciting. don't just describe things. Description is good, but don't describe EVERYTHING. city life IS WAAY harder than this. Nothng works out like this, everything goes wrong somewhere. I like this story. please improve :D |
| Terminator Bunny 4.0 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseno offense but usually Hobbes is not as excited about this stuff as he is and Hobbes doesn't do teh mechanical stuff (reference to when hobbes fixes up te thinking caps |
| stripesgetoffme 2008-05-24 ch 3, | abuseUpdate, upate, update, update, and updatex10. Please update soon or I'll keep buging you about it. |
| spiff455 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abusegreat story! i love C and H, update soon! |