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Reviews for: Halfway Between an Inhale and Exhale
7e1
2009-02-05 . chapter 1
this is a lovely beautiful story! really well written and some great moments for them. please write more! :)
Noritsu
2008-04-24 . chapter 1
Lovely story!
My favorite line is "No one's been eaten by a bear in years."
The flashback sections were nice. I've always wondered if Desmond's willingness to flee were because he truly feels he's unworthy or if it's actually because he has an aversion to being 'pinned down'.
And Daniel saying he can't leave the island without Des kind of speaks for itself. I wonder how Penny will feel about Desmond telling her that they need to work Daniel into their lives.

Nori
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2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Great story! I love Desmond and Penny, and you did such a nice job writing Penny's POV. It was really well done.
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