-hugs self- You did a great job on writing this.

Hmm... interesting, although the ending was slightly disappointing... I'm glad you got the right pairings in my book and didn't make Sai gay. Keep it up!

this is sad...
good work though!

This story flowed well, and I liked how their thoughts came in, giving the reader an insight to the character's true thoughts. It was an interesting AU fanfiction (it is right?)

Lovely connection with the smiles; somehow, I'd have loved to see Sai smile for Ino, though in this situation, I suppose they were both too sad to give real smiles. Someday, somehow, hopefully they'll be able to make each other smile! :D

Thanks for writing this!

The dialogue - both in their words and their thoughts - was very moving. I enjoyed it~

Love it!

Their thoughts are really interesting. If only they'd blurt them out lol.

Woah, man. That was like amazing! I happen to adore SaiIno and this was great and the whole thinking part. And the opening lines on the rain were good. Though my favorite part was the best friends that was very good. Kudos and I must fav this >.< It is to good. The end was good too. It kind of summed it all up.

This is probably the strongest fic you've ever written. And the saddest. For now.

I'll be looking forward to your other one shots.

I really, really love this. I was going to writer a NejixIno like this...but the whole thing I was gonna do with the words meaning something else has been done now so there's not much point. Better than I'd ever do it anyway. >x<

Added it to my c2 - Delicious Cake.

Also, after redirecting from your review for Kaiga Kanojono I couldn't agree with you more. SPREAD THE INO LOVE.

BRILLIANT!
XD

OMG, I like the translations in the thoughts. Haha, awesome.

I was not expecting this from you. Your stories have always been funny, sarcastic and fun to read. This, however, is so sad it almost broke my heart! You surprised me. Kudos my friend! Well done for a first time.

Aw. That's so cute, I just like it!

Cute but sad.

... 0_o

WOW..

WOW..

WOW..

That was an amazing oneshot. I can't stop saying WOW.