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lili20
2008-07-07 . chapter 9
I liked your story, thanks for writing it. I am so sorry about your grandma; I'm sure she is with our Heavenly Father right now, watching over her family.
Nidhoegg
2008-06-27 . chapter 9
I'm so very sorry for your loss. Try to keep on going. My thoughts are with you and your family.

The story was greater than great! Love your style.
pris
2008-06-25 . chapter 9
another wondrful chapter
irismay42
2008-06-25 . chapter 9
That was a really 'different' story from the Brotherhood canon in that it mostly revolved around Joshua and his 'deal' to save Caleb rather than Dean's deal to save Sam.

Well done on finishing, especially during such a difficult time.
irismay42
2008-06-25 . chapter 8
Your Joshua POV chapters have been really interesting in this story - and I like how you have his 'deal' mirroring Dean's.
LovinJackson
2008-06-25 . chapter 9
Hey Ti

I loved this story from start to finish from the first time I read it to now. It's been one of my favourites but i tend to think that about every new story you write ... I love the way you write these characters and I love a good Josh story so Josh in this was awesome! I hope your feeling okay, as much as you can *hugs*
Tara x0x
Winchester73
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
The emotion in the chapter is wonderful, with the ebb and flow of protectiveness that they share. Can't wait!
Becomingwhaturmeantobe
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
I am so sorry to hear about your grandmother.

This story was excellent. I really loved it. Awesome job. Again, I'm so sorry for your loss.
winchesterwannabe
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Hey, awesome last chapter! i totally loved it. a perfect mix of sadness and their usual joking. i really liked the part when Caleb apologized. I could see it in my head so clearly. :) looking forward to Rid's story!!
Also, I am so sorry to hear about your grandmother, Tidia! I will pray for you and your family. :)
raputathebuta
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Oh Tidia! Great job! I'm anxious to see what swearing allegiance to the Coven will mean for Joshua & Esme. I actually feel bad for Josh, even though I love when the boys get all snarky on him.

I'm eagerly awaiting the next Brotherhood story.

Off-topic: My deepest sympathies on the loss of your grandmother. I'll keep her & you, & your family in my thoughts. *hugs*
Darthnikki
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Great chapter, I'm so sorry for your loss. My thoughts and prayers are with you xx It was a nice way to end the story suprised Dean has'nt snapped sooner though...but then thats what we love about him right? The fact that he takes so much crap from people? Never retaliating...Man I love Dean xx Looking forward to the next story
Lilly B.
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
great job on the last chapter tidia...thanks for the update. i really enjoyed reading this story.

i'm really sorry to hear about your grandmother...i know there is nothing that could be said to take the pain away during this difficult time, but i hope you and your family find some peace soon.
Lynn-G
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Please tell me that yours and Ridley's version they do find a way to save Dean...


Awesome story hon' :)
ames 449
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Im sorry about your grandmother, Tid. Hugs and well wishes your way.

I'm sad this story is done, but I liked the round up at the end. the 'almost' normality from the conversation and then the dumping of Mac's hell folder on the group - the reminder that things are really up the creek.

great little fic. Thanks for sharing. :)
lovinandrew
2008-06-24 . chapter 9
Hey Tidia

My condolence's mate Its devastating to lose someone close. Grandparents are very special and my thoughts are with you.

The emotions and bonding in this last chapter was sweet and now its finished all i can say is wow another great story mate. You just keep dishing them out and i hope you keep doing it. Loved Johsua's comment in the chapter before about Drew. And i loved Esma, Josh and Dean in the car on the way back lol. Though i wish Dean would lighten up on Josh a little. I know why he cant forget but Josh did give up alot and he might complain when he is contacted but when its important he doeesnt hesitate, and he and his mother did save Caleb. Anways i loved the whole fic your awesome and cant wait for the next one :)

Debbie :)
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