|Reviews for A Guiding Hand|
| itsthenargles394 4/8/13 . chapter 12
I love your story, its so good!
| Lady Diana of the Moon 2/7/13 . chapter 10
Okay, in Chapter 2, you call him Remus Nigel Lupin, now you're calling him Remus Jonathan Lupin. Would you PLEASE hurry up and make up your mind already about Remus's middle name?
| andrestingleff 5/5/12 . chapter 12
i really hope that u get on with this story sometime, and i would really like to see fred and george in trouble with remus, and remus showing his displeasure the same way he does harry, hugs hope it gets going
| MissCHSparkles 4/19/12 . chapter 10
ah, I see you changed Remus's middle name to John. cool
it was a good chapter, Sirius needed to be taught a good lesson so he could understand what he did wrong.
| MissCHSparkles 4/19/12 . chapter 8
this was a good chapter but it seems to be a bit of an over reaction. I mean, they just got drunk one time, almost all teenagers do that. and it would take an extreme amount of alcohol to do any damage and if they reacted like this because of a little drinking, how would they react if the kids really did something bad?
| MissCHSparkles 4/19/12 . chapter 2
good chapter although I'm curious about Remus's middle name as we know it's meant to be John. Just curious, did you decide Nigel made a better middle name?
| adamsfan 8/26/11 . chapter 12
i loved it! it had remus becoming guardian of harry and thats what i've always wanted :D plus the spankings lol. please write more
| puppylove98162 7/22/11 . chapter 1
Sarcasm will get you nowhere, Harry.
| SerpentWinged 5/21/11 . chapter 12
Are you a Spanking Fetish or something? Lol! This is an awesome fic and I hope you continue it! :D
| Jasmine Ann Snape 5/21/11 . chapter 12
Great story but I think Snape should be put in too XD
| Elriaen 4/21/11 . chapter 12
Wonderful! I have seen quite a few Sirius/Harry family fics, some with spanking and some without, but this is the first Remus/Harry I've found.
I adore your Dumbledore! Full of the inherant playfulness that Rowling gave him but with the instant ability to turn stern. And thank goodness, someone can get through to Remus in his I-am-useless phases. He certainly needs it! I'm almost worried for him when Tonks comes into the picture though (if she will, in your story). Don't even want to imagine Dumbledore's reaction to him running from her and Teddy. Never mind what Tonks herself would do...
So, I will ask for what I always ask for in these kind of fics.
1. Please develop some kind of casual relationship between Harry and whatever love interest you want to give him. In my opinion, Harry/Ginny in the books, while brilliant, didn't have nearly enough working up to their relationship.
2. Please develop Sirius' character. He sounds like he is stuck in childhood (almost) right now which makes sense as before Azkaban, he was only 20. But now he has the same family around him that Harry does and he can develop some maturity. Though obviously not too much, it is Sirius!
3. Please, please, please, if you carry on into 5th year (which I really hope you do!), don't kill Sirius! Clearly, it is entirely your choice, but I love the guy too much not to plead for him!
And finally (this is really getting too long), I have a few spelling/grammar niggles.
You've spelt Voldemort 'Voldimort' a few times.
British teenagers would use 'Mum' rather than 'Mom'.
I'm sorry if I sound pompus with those, especially with the Mum/Mom thing. I am English myself and it is one of my pet hates...
Hopefully I've not made myself sound like a complete prat, and that is actually helpful! Please keep writing!
| inkbolt93 9/12/10 . chapter 12
I love this story! Its really interesting and actually the first Remus/Harry guardian story i've read! Its also the reason i've signed up to this site! (I'm a kinda girl :P)So please update soon!
| Stevo17 8/22/10 . chapter 12
Plasce keep it going i have read it about 5 time love the story and mayby have rumes spank harry and ron at the same time too
| mischabren 7/21/10 . chapter 12
Great story! I hope you update again sometime, even though it's been awhile... :-)
| CTgirl14 6/29/10 . chapter 12
LoL ,perfect last line ,please update soon