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Reviews For: Smile With Me

Anonymous
2008-08-17
ch 5, anon.
abuseO_O;

DUDE! I thought this was gonna be a cute, teen angst type story, but HOLY CRAP! I definitely was not expecting THAT of all things to happen.

Holy **.

I mean, it's a brilliant story so far, but wow... Was not expecting Strong Bad to get... damn. I don't know what to say. Wonderful story, I love how you represent the characters. I'm just shocked by how this chapter started. Holy **.
Efga
2008-07-07
ch 5,
abuseI noticed that the chapters are quite short. It didn't really bother me though, because I like your writing style.

Keep it up, because I want to read more of this!
Efga
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abuseI've only read the prologue so far, but I felt that I wanted to tell you that it's a very good start. I really want to read more. So that's what I'm gonna do now.
Puffles45
2008-05-27
ch 5,
abuseI`m loving this story! Keep Going!
Amme Moto
2008-05-23
ch 4,
abusePersonally I don't know why I didn't try to find this before. ^.^;; I was betaing for someone else and I was like "I wonder if HeronStorm ever posted?" And I went and looked and here you are!!

I like this story a lot. ^.^;; For some reason Strong BadXHomestar Runner seems right. Lol.

I read your profile. I think you and I are a lot alike. I have a jacket that I never take off, too, but it's black and says "Band is the one True Sport". ^.^;; Be sure to email me your next few chapters when you're done with them!

~Amme Moto
Band8PGeek
2008-05-23
ch 1,
abuseI've only discovered Homestar Runner literally a week ago. And already I am a fan of it. And of this.
And I can't say any more without becoming a stereotypical slash-ho. =P
Shwoo
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuseGreat start. I like it so far. I'm glad someone decided to do the history of the characters, that's always interested me.

By the way, you're more likely to get reviews if you enable anonymous reviews. I know I'm too lazy to log in most of the time.
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