that chapter was funny i loved the song ^.^ and for gimmicks i only have evil ones you could have Gaara steal some little kids dog who's walking by and tells them to buy some cookies or else the dog gets it or have him in a trench coat and go up to a kid say hey want some cookies but then Ed or Al stop him somehow. then you could bring Kairi into the story some how. but of course you don't have to listen to me. so yeah nice chapter. keep writing can't wait to read your next chapter.