Another review haha! I loved it. I noticed it isn't complete yet so hope you have a chance to finish it! Or you just forgot to change the status. Great job and good luck.

Later.

Luna Rei Harmony

Damn! I wish there was more!:

It's A GREAT STORY! Don't worry Sasuke wasn't that OOC...much...

I likeds it a LOT!At the begging i didn't like how a bunch of your sentences started with AND! "Or maybe it is just a joke,a sad,(i REALLY wish that you put sick here...)cruel joke that men like to play." I LOVE THAT SENTENCE! "Oh dear. She thinks she's having a crush." I didn't really like that part...
But over all it was preety good. Don't worry Sasuke wasn't that OOC...I think...Don't worry though!}

It's a great story so far. I like how there's tension between Sasuke and Sakura because she's a thief and he's a police officer. You do a pretty good job of writing SasuSaku, which, by the way, is one of my favorite pairings in the Naruto universe. . I hope you continue soon. Until then, I wait for more!

Lover of Stories

Hello,

I've been FAR too busy to be r&ring. After Fri my misery will be over.

Anyhow, Yeah I kinda agreed with you about the ending. I was hoping for a better emotional conclusion between the two of them. Oh well...

I just wanted to tell you that I was actually planning on writing a fic that follows this kind of thought. Sakura is a daughter of a Yakuza leader while Sasuke is the son of a police chief. It's still an ambitious thought, however. Not even sure if this should be a comedy or an political action drama with the classic star-crossed lovers thing.

That's not bad at all! It was interesting and original I like it However I'd love to see an epilogue, to show us how it ended, if they decided to go out or not)

it is fine! calm down the ending would have been slightly better if you just ended it with sasuke saying he was gonna be her parole officer but otherwise it was perfect.

OH. Oh. So Sakura is a thief... I thought so. You should add another chapter for closure, or something. Even if it's just for me. . As for the OOCness, IT'S UNFIXABLE. Cause if in every fic Sasuke was OC, then it would probably not be a good story, cause Sasuke has no REAL emotions in the anime. So don't worry about it.

Not too bad, but I seriously have no clue where this story is going. ...So update soon and I can find out, ok?

Interesting beginning I'll be waiting for more.