So does this mean that Muraki's going to get all hung up of Terazuma? LOLOLOLOLOL

I've actually thought about a Muraki/Terzuma story, but only because Terazuma resembles Tsuzuki a lot.

I hope you update this eventually. I'd love to know how Muraki and Terazuma would take to each other. 3

Nice! I love this first chapter... Please, update up as soon as possible because; I can't wait to read the next chapter. And see how different this is from the anime. Later!

I think a Hisoka/Terazuma pairing is quite refreshing. Thanks for your originality, I cannot wait to read more.

Yes! I love this pairing but I hardly ever see it! I can't wait for an update!)

Wow! This sounds good so far. I never thought of that idea. I can not wait to see how this plays out!

YES! HA! I knew if I was patient eventually /someone/ would have to write this pairing. I mean, yeah, I like tsu/soka, but it gets a bit overdone, you know? Besides, I think Terazuma and Hisoka are more similar in personality- more of a match. But I've only ever found one tera/soka story, and it was a one-sided thing with Terazuma pining over a Hisoka who was with Tsuzuki. Hooray for requited love! Assuming this is going to be requited of course.

There are some errors here and there, but overall, nice one! And I really like this pairing! Definately a watch!

i was supposed to write a terazuma/hisoka fic, but i kinds didnt have time and forgot about it... thank you for posting this! i noticed that there arent that many fics that derive from the usual couples (tsusoka, tatari... not that i have a problem with those or anything) i think its great when someone tries something new!
is this gonna be a case-fic or more of 'it has cases, but they arent the real focus-terazuma and hisokas relationship is'?

oh, are tsuzuki and wakaba gonna show up? are they partners or do they just have some OC partenrs?

im really excited about this fic! and i hope ur life doesnt interfere too much with ur updating!

take care!

ps. is muraki gonna be appearing? (get some angst into thhis fic! (and, yes, i know im a sadist, but who isnt when it comes to hiskoa?))

Very interesting, indeed! Do continue please! I like how they still remained in character and I'm curious so as to how they would eventually meet Muraki.
Good job! Update soon!

I want to read about them!