Reviews for The Breaking Point

Spartan-3x13 2008-06-30 ch 1,	abuseThat was great. What I really liked was the change you made on how the fire started. If I remember right, the black cat DID start it but it was more by accident than design. Definite fave. BTW what grade did you get for it?
PorcupineCuty 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseThis was really wel written. I love how you went into complete detail with the fire. I hope you got a good grade on it. Great job!
Nobody's Child 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abuseGood Job Jordie-Kinns! And I Hope your Teacher didn't Find out that you used a video Game... although he/she may have reconized the Alice in Wonderland Theam... Hope you got a good Grade! Love Ya!