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Lunar Roxas
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
Cool! This is awsome!
Great oneshot.
xXlil'eveXx
2008-07-16 . chapter 1
WOAH!
the starting had me taken aback!
I thought Roxas was the one who broke up with Olette
It was nice of you to make that cheater become Seifer.
And i think it was kinda sad for Olette
But it was a happy ending at the end :D
The Bronx Puppetmaster
2008-05-23 . chapter 1
Just amazing...and it's Roxette!
xXbluerainsXx
2008-05-14 . chapter 1
haha what an adorable story=] this is one of the stories i was talking about when i sent you that request on myspace=] but i really do think that you have alot of talent when it comes to writing=] (sigh) but curse that butaneng who is now something like eczi...i wish i could have a fan fic written for me...T_T haha
perfect sorceress
2008-05-05 . chapter 1
SO cute!! You were fooling me there for a second! I thought it was Roxas who had broken up with her! Three thumbs up...if possible! :D

- perfect sorceress -
2ne5
2008-04-16 . chapter 1
I was confused when I read this story but cuz I thought The boy that olette was talking about is roxas..until I read It..IT was seifer!XD and oh...talking about tounge stabbing..Xp but who cares!! I love the story especially the part when roxas says yes on the other side of the door.That made me blush X3 cuz I cant imagine a roxas like that!! (I really luv naughty roxas!!) and oh..pls update soon your Homerun cuz it rocks!!er...I have nothing to say so..

ciao my dear!!
lilmoonwritter
2008-04-14 . chapter 1
haha...awsem!...good idea...^^...how you describe her breakup and her not gettin over it was really good... are you goin to continue it?? i hope you do!!...
Midnight Hikari
2008-04-13 . chapter 1
SUSHI! SQUE! So cute! X3 *Adds to favorite* Can I have some virtual-sushi now? XD
Nuclear Burp
2008-04-13 . chapter 1
Haha! Sushi and hunky Male, Or Dr Phil and Ice cream? Decisions, decisions...

I liked, do more! MORE DAMMIT MORE!

Maybe I should do a Roxette hinting in my main fac...

Nabanaba
jcola0823
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
Awesome! The first part was kind adepressing but true..and I laughed at the "Someone had gone through a divorce after finding out his wife was cheating on him with another woman. Ouch." part xD and then at "Instead it was just me, myself, and Oprah. Not exactly the kind of company I had wanted."

and the ending was really dute! *imagens Roxas jumping for joy*
yay for sushi! =3
eCZi
2008-04-12 . chapter 1
I jumped at the word "sushi".
LAWL.
I'm in the mood for sushi, too.
ROXAS, TAKE ME WITH YOU!
XD
Anyways, I found the quirkyness (if tha'ts even a word, and if it is, I'm probably using it REALLY WRONGLY. I don't think that's a word either. Nor, proper grammar.) of this fic quite amusing.
Okay, I should stop with the smart act. -sighs-
Anyways, I found it really funny.
"Me, Myself, and Oprah."
LAWL.
I LOVE the Oprah Winfrey show, though. Did you hear about the Pregnant Man?
I be not kidding you.
I think God's kinda ashamed at his creation. Pshh, cuz I would be! I wouldn't blame the guy.
I digress. I hope I used THAT word right (Thank you, Axel.)
Oh, Olette was just asking for it to be a date. ROXAS AND OLETTE SITTING IN A...SUSHI PLACE! M-U-N-C-H-I-N...G! On sushi. :D
I really, REALLY liked it! (I was gonna say "I likes it", but my expression of favouritism shall not be expressed through incorrect grammar.)
But I should do it anyways. It's not like I'm graded or anything.
I LIKES IT!
:D
Thank you SO much for writing this for me! Dang, I feel so SPECIAL! -Goes insane-
Thanks you! :]]
I'd really wanna write another one back, but since this was for the one I wrote, I'm kinda...Well, I should write another one ANYWAYS. When I get inspiration!
buahahaha.
-cackles maniacally-
THANKS AGAIN! -huggles Dark Ambition...a lot!-
:D
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