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| ferman 2008-07-07 ch 7,  | abuseWow... These drabbles are really good, they actually reflect Galadriel, I believe. Please go on with these. |
| Frodo's Girl Forever 2008-05-30 ch 8, | abuseLol! Galadriel and Celeborn are NOT surprisingly funny when drunk! That was a great chapter! Good luck with the next one and the ones AFTER that! |
| Ellynn 2008-05-30 ch 8, | abuse*laughing* Nice, sweet, funny. :) |
| Frodo's Girl Forever 2008-05-25 ch 7, | abuseNice chapters! I read all the current ones, and, yes, I think Celeborn and Galadriel are just awesome together! Interesting vision he caught in the mirror! Good luck with future chapters--I look forward to them all! |
| Marchwriter 2008-05-21 ch 6, | abuseA beautiful and evocative collection. Well done! Best, The Lady of Light |
| MiniFruitbat 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abuseOnce again, I'm happy to see another chapter. |
| StarofElendil 2008-05-16 ch 6, | abuseI did think that the short snippet of poetry sounded like Yeats =) This was very neat. I loved the mention of the dreamflower -- I adore Tolkien's names for Lothlorien. Absolutely beautiful. You showed Galadriel's love for Celeborn in a way that is very characteristic, as she is not very demonstrative but she is intensely beautiful in both looks and personality. You caught that almost wild intensity of hers very well. Excellently well done! |
| StarofElendil 2008-05-09 ch 5, | abuse*bigeyes* That's cool. Thank you very much. I love it in that it shows, again, Galadriel's heart as she sees Arwen. THANK YOU. |
| StarofElendil 2008-05-09 ch 4, | abuseWOW -- I'll take this one, thanks to you. I really loved this. Having her run because she couldn't take her father's love. Sounds familiar to me as I am a Christian. The last sentence shows Galadriel's steely side that would strengthen throughout the years, of course. Thank you. |
| StarofElendil 2008-05-09 ch 3, | abuse:-) Thanks for showing this side of her. |
| StarofElendil 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseLovely! Of course she wouldn't fear for herself but for her family -- how many times have I felt the same? Now, even though I've read Silmarillion more than once and Unfinished Tales, I'm not as proficient in the story, so I don't remember Galadriel being under Melian's guidance. However I really like the idea. By the way, Melian is one of my favorite Silmarillion characters. :-) |
| StarofElendil 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseJust wanted to commend you on writing Galadriel -- she is one of my favorite characters. The way you handled her was nicely done; I think she would ask herself that, impersonally, just as you did it. I'm looking foward to reading more. |
| MiniFruitbat 2008-05-09 ch 5, | abuseThanks for the update! Keep up the excellent work! |
| Ellfine 2008-04-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseThese are fun. I'm enjoying them immensely! Love the sword one with Aegnor and his comment about her commnet :-) |
| Jen Lewis 2008-04-20 ch 3, | abuseI'm enjoying these little drabbles ^_^ A little short, but I completely understand how hard it is to get length and feel comfortable about it. Practice helps though ^_~ |