nice story

really nice

Hi

I just read your story it was very good. I love happy ending.

This is a fitting sequel to your first piece. Again I will say how envious I am of the writers who can tell a story in a second language, and tell it in a way that we (with only that one language) can understand it. That is remarkable to me.

Now, for a challenge try a longer piece! I have no doubt you can do it, after all you did two in a row. ;-) I will be looking for more.

I am responding to both here, not separately. Wow, MP had courage to do something positive for herself - a very good beginning. The 26 day wait had to be extremely difficult for her, likely she felt that he had not believed her, that it iwas a trap, that he was gone. But, from Jarod's point of view, it was a necessity, I get that, I am sure that she will too. (But 26 days is a long time when your life is in the balance!) But when Jarod does come to her, it is beautifully done - not at her house, with two options for her, then he waits for her. So glad that she made a quick and positive and correct decision. And, catharsis is a great thing, to be highly valued. Loved this 2 part work - please write more for us. Thanks for sharing!

Simply wonderful!

thx

Lovely. ;)

great job...i love this so much

God bless