This story is SO much better than you gave it credit for. XD The fact that it was descriptive for the most part made it all the more beautifully well-written. I really, really liked this one-shot.

Beautiful. Again, there must be such an interesting back story to how they came to this point- I'd love to hear it. But I think, for now, I'm more interested in hearing more of the other one (if I have any say in the matter). Nice job- again :)

It was... just... completely amazing. I adored it - in fact, it inspired me to write my own Labyrinth fanfiction. I really enjoyed seeing this side of the Goblin King - you can always sense something different about him in the movie, something lying deep within the surface that's hard to see. I think you portrayed him very well. I especially loved the last couple of sentences. All in all, even though there was despair that Jareth wouldn't make it, it gave me very warm fuzzies. I loved it.

Thanks for sharing this,you've been missed. ;)

aww! this was wonderful! i liked this side of him! it was sad and sweet all at the same time ^_^ more please!

wow. point blank.

A character study piece. And you thought it was just a descriptive work!

I love the way you use words and make them fresh in every piece.

Thank you for sharing

Ah.

Okay, this was really well-written and very sweet. Sure, I have no idea what's going on with Sarah and her backstory, but that's not important. It's the overlying fluffiness and happy ending that make it worth it.

I liked this piece.

wow. that was beautifully great.

This was a lovely oneshot. It was incredibily well written and was nice to read.

Keep Writing!

I'm so glad your back! It feels like forever since you've posted anything!

Anyway, this was a lovely story, beautifully written and it was nice to see someone portrayal a vulnerable Jareth, it makes a refreshing change from the incessantly all powerful version ;).

Anyway, keeping writing! You'll always have an audience!

Will there be a chapter 2 ?

Today' s chapter is fine and dandy. It is so cool. Is there anymore of those groovy chapters head our way. Have a good Sunday. Keep smiling. :-)

Oh, how I've missed your stories! I actually re-read The Trouble With Mr. Knightley a couple of weeks ago.

This is a lovely little one-shot. Your description of Sarah's approach is wonderful; I could see everything very clearly in my mind (especially the glittery fairy poop, lol). You have such a way of putting the reader right there in the story.

Enchanting, my friend.

fm