'If there was a B, there was probably an A, too. And since he had said 'one of many' there could be a whole alphabet of them.'

lmfao@ that sentence. well L is a bit OOC, and the fact that he accepted Light's insults about "ruining people's lives" annoyed me a bit. Because it is not L's fault that A decided to commit suicide, and it is not L's fault that Beyond Birthday decided to kill criminals. Well I'm still excited to see what you intend to do with this, though, so I will keep reading. There seems to be a lot of mystery going on with B and L, something that I rather enjoy.
Nice story so far :#

WOAH! UPDATE SOON! Plot sounds great!

Please! Please! Please updaate soon! I love it!

I really hope that you continue, because I'm hooked. And there just can't be enough stories including be :D I like how you made him all insane and violent >:DD

Hopefully Raito will be okay ':|

i'll offer to beta
while i have no experince i am on the computer everyday and will be able to send back the edited copy within a hour of receiving it.

regardless
great chap and an interesting plot

oow! i loved it, that was great :)
continue please!

This is really good.

I like it so far ^^ Update soon!

Really good so far! I can't wait for the next chapter.

THAT WAS GREAT.

You have a very good begining. I can not wait for the next chapter. I have to ask will Light get his memories back at some point? I was on the edge of my set for the last half of the chapter.

Good story. My only complaint is that the people that Beyond is controlling with the Death Note are being made to do things that are out of character, which is beyond (pun not intended :P) the powers of the Death Note. Especially the warden trying to kill Light, though that was surprising in a scary way.

W-O-W! You've got an interesting storyline going on here. It's sounds immensely interesting. I liked how you chose the name and your knowledge of human anatomy is definately greater than my own.

Great!

I think this is the first review, ne?

I hope to see more soon!

~ Oni

I really like this!Please update when you can! I cant wait to read more(: