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| Sarafly 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuseI ve always thought that the scene is very intimate and beautiful. The way she looks at him, and he corresponds. Its sad bopt hopeful, I don't know. I love your story and the way you recreated it, with their feelings and thoughts . |
| shortie990 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseLuv it! |
| RubixCSIpuzzle 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI loved this very much. Are you going to do one for how they got together? that would be good if you did one! |
| MySoap 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseThnaks for this story. it was very sad and I could feel what sara felt. Good job. kerstin |
| Ampad 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story. You captured the pure angst of it all beautifully. |
| My Kate 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseexcellent!...beautiful insight into these two characters during what I always considered a pivotal scene...like you, I always watch that interaction and say aloud, "Wait...what just happened here?"...thanks for this enjoyable piece! |
| kruemi 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written! I'm happy to see something new from you! |
| stareagle 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked your description of this scene, I agree with the way you have explained it. It was a strange scene - and I still don't quite understand why Billy played Gil this way but it was powerful- he definitely communicated Gil's awkwardness in intimate settings, especially with Sara. |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI loved your take on this scene! Fabulous! |