OW, ow ow, knife-twisting hurts! But it's so good when you do it! :)

AGH, I've NEVER felt this bad for Genesis, and mixed in with Zack's pain and the loss he's feeling - of Angeal, his parents, Cloud, everything...it's all so mournful. Good thing I like that.

So lovely still, and so many updates in such a short time. Now you're just inviting more whining the next time you hit a dry spell. :)

Poor Genesis, his life sucked, being unloved and called a monster by his parents and then learning your friends are also 'monsters'. The poor guy.

Dude, already, another one? Thank you!

Hmm, interesting, and it really works. This explanation of Genesis not only fits the events and his character, but makes him more sympathetic. I feel bad for him in a way I couldn't watching the cutscenes, because there I was so focused on Zack. Here, they are both caught in a nightmare.

::hugs them both::

I don't think I've read a fanfiction so indepth, its so good. I mean, some parts are so sad and I feel like I'm there witenessing it. You have talent, just, wow, amazing job.

OMG, I finally get to leave you a DG review for the first time in FOREVER and all my brain is coming up with is "Omigod, you updated, please tell me I'm not hallucinating!"

Okay, brain, calm down. Squee, and you return with such a lovely, pensive chapter for us. I can hear the quiet tension of so many feelings all through it like the sound of waves in a seashell. Zack's memory of Angeal is so powerful when it peeks through the present to haunt him. This whole story is haunting, in the very best way.

And now I'm wondering how you'll handle Genesis...and when. :) Thank you!

Hey! I am now TOTALLY seeing spots cause I have spent the last few hours reading your BRILLIANT story! I don't think I have read anything where Zack and Cloud are so beautifully portrayed together. So addicted now! I wait in anticipation of the next installment! Rhi

This fic is the most beautiful and impacting story I've read in a long time D: I can't wait to keep reading!! Please update soon~~!

The looming troubles ahead of them...D: Oh man, the tension is killing me! I must read on!

...on another note, in the last section, I dunno why but I read "Do you know what sets us apart from breasts" and then the answer "culture"...I-I loled. A lot. XD *fails massively* I then read again and laughed some more because my eyes suck so bad I misread beasts XD

Waugh! This fic has just barely started and I've got tears in my eyes! D:

*sigh* If they're at Gongaga then that means the story is nearly finished. *another sigh*

I enjoyed this chapter very much. I look forward to seeing the picture, too.

Oh no! You changed your summary! Although I do think this is a great fic thus far, I am NOT a Cloud X Tifa fan at all. I'm so torn!

Cloud

Agh, I knew Zack meeting up with Lazard would be painful. ::winces:: He seems to be handling it okay, though. Poor baby, wondering why Angeal isn't holding him, and it's not Angeal. After all that rushing to get to him, too.

We're getting toward the end, aren't we? Well, at least the rest, like what's gone before, is sure to be beautiful.

That was beautifully written. I'm really loving this version of the story.

I'm enjoying this story-- thanks for writing it!

I forgot how much I liked this story =] I'm so glad it's back! Great chapter ^_^