wow, this is SO CUTE! i wish this had really happened, it seemed like the sorts of things seto and katsuya would do. :-) i'm glad they ended up together in the end.

oh, and teen mokuba rocks! :D

^__^ How sweet! I love the ending!

Awesomly cute story, I liked it alot. ^^

HI Angle,
I loved this, I like the fact that you incorporated the orphanage and a ball. Very simple and sweet. I like the fact that Joey never gave up on his friend even when his friend was wanting him to have no more involvement with hij.
I was kinda sad at the end that Seto would forget Joey as a child. I think it was due to his hard life from his adopted father.
Mokuba remembered the best. I was touch that he still had the round ball from his days at the orphanage.
Great read and good luck with the next rounds. Looking forward to reading more from my fav author. Darlene.

i really liked this. i was really worried until right at the end there that nothing at all had ever come from their meeting in the past, but the end was great. definitely adding to my favorites :)

Mm, I did like it. It was very well written. Just... it's something about the ending. (I'm glad you had the '8 years later' thing, I was hoping you would.) It's just that, if you tie this to the actual cannon, *does* he actually remember Jou? M... well in any case, very nice, I definetely can't wait 'till we get to the hard rounds to see what you'll whip up. ^^

That's an interesting take on Seto's orphanage time, it was a very entertaining read.

Good luck on the contest!

aww love it

Very sweet. Too bad Seto doesn't remember but perhaps some day he will. I really liked it.

A very quaint piece. I liked the orphanage. Only thing bugging me was that it seemed Kaiba couldn't remember Jou had been the one who'd kissed him before. Or did I miss something?

That was awesome. It kind of got me confused at the end, but after some hiking, I finally got it. Yeah, I'm clueless. ^^ Once again, great story.