Oh, really nice! I love that other side of Wei, Cao Pi being such a cute brat and Cao Cao being a good father.

Indeed. This Cao Pi sounds a lot like the rest of his brothers. They were not evil people... And I'm glad that Cao Pi isn't a bastard, yet.

Hm... well I must say it is cute. However, maybe you should re-read your fics for spelling errors, grammar, and punctuation flaws. Just re-read some sentences aloud to help yourself find the mistakes.

Overall, keep improving and keep up the creativity.

~runi