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YvesDarling
2009-11-26 . chapter 10
Well I'm going to say this; I love you're KibaSaku stories. :D

I've gotten very attatched to KibaSaku just recently after I started writing a story of mine. I wanted to read some FanFiction to increase my love for the crack-pairing and I happened to find Serendipity. :] I'm glad I did. Ahahaha.

I really liked the daycare parts though. They were really amusing.

Over all I really liked the story. Very cute and funny. :]

I really hope to see more KibaSaku fics from you though! You make them really cute. :D

-Yvette
im-mute-coz-u-nvr-care.
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
lurve ity!
piscesofMYheart.
2009-10-22 . chapter 10
WOW. Just WOW. This is mysecond KXS fic, and I love it. Of course, I read the prequel first...Kudos to that, but this story was amazing.

The lines before and after the story were cute. Really.

"If there was one thing I learned from Sakura, it was that most girls don’t want cookie-cutter flirtation techniques.
They want real boys, real feelings. That’s what made Sakura fall for Sasuke.
That was what, eventually, made her fall for me.
She doesn’t like to admit it. But we’re living happily ever after now.
Take that, Disney."

I loved that one the most. The part with Akina and Sousuke were cute (where have I heard of him before??), and I liked how you wrote Kiba to deal with Akina after the "heartbreak". It was really sweet.

Oh. NOW I remember. Did you get it off of "Ponyo?"

~Miki
MelodysFall
2009-10-07 . chapter 10
It's me, again! Me! If you remember me 8)

I'm totally stalking your stories. Even though i should be starting on my homework like RIGHT now. </3 stupid procrastination, stupid me D:

Anyways. The last sentence was brilliant! It seriously finished the story very fittingly. And, oh, Kiba <3 It makes me wish i had a real life Kiba here with me so he can profess his love to me while standing on a coffee table. Slick, suave, Kiba. But the relationship with Sasuke and Sakura was very unique. I've never read anything like it before. I mean, it was so cute! He loved her, alright, but not in the in love way. Which was sort of heartbreaking. But I can live with that.

I love Disney. Who doesn't? I think my favorite is Mulan and Pocahontas. And Snow White. But my least favorite would be Sleeping Beauty. I don't know why, though, it just doesn't appeal to me. meh...

This was perfectly perfect! I was ATTEMPTING to watch Another Cinderella Story- the one with Selena Gomez(I know.) But i had watched the one with Hilary Duff and I had free time so i was trying to get the parts in Youtube. It was epic fail, to say the least. I only got to see some clips, that's all. :(

Anyways! I feel like i've babbled on too far. And i just looked at the clock *cringe* I should really put a limit to my time on the internet. byebye! (which means, till next story.) :D
Uzumaki-Reiko
2009-10-07 . chapter 10
I really liked this story, the way it was told was very humourous and seemed totally real! I could imagine the scenes happening all the way, and Kiba amused me to no end. Thanks for sharing this great story!!

-Rei.
Shubhs
2009-09-25 . chapter 10
LOVE.LOVE.LOVE.HEARTHEARTHEART!

Is there anything else left to say? :)(twikletwinkletwinkle)
bloocheeze
2009-09-20 . chapter 6
Er, by "Naruto and Sasuke were the only ones left in the café aside from Ami, still behind the counter." I'm certain you meant 'Kiba' instead of 'Sasuke'. Just wanted to point that out :)
MiniSaki265
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
OMYFLIPPINPANCAKES !

kayso , i was just randomly looking for fanfics and i stumbled to yours . i honestly , positively loved it ! seriously , it rox . i HAD to go back and review : ) i read the last part over and over again . keep writing because your amazing .
Amai Yume no Akemi
2009-09-06 . chapter 10
..Dear Lord. That was so. freaking. cute. Seriously.
AngelicRoses
2009-08-26 . chapter 10
Wow. I have to say that i am extremely impressed with this story.

I found that there were a lot of morals and views on relationships in this story that i find very true.

The gradual development and change of Kiba's personality and the way he treated women was realistic and sweet.

I agree completely with this statement of yours, "They want real boys, real feelings."

Because people can deny it all they want; but deep down, 99% of women do desire gentlemen; real men. Not the floozy, cheap subsitutes.

In short, 100/100 is the rating that i give to this story. Good job!
shurikengrl
2009-08-07 . chapter 10
that was of the awesomest stories EVER! :D
KaT stah
2009-07-17 . chapter 10
You have officially made me LOVE KibaSaku! I absolutely love Kiba now!
KaT stah
2009-07-17 . chapter 4
I really like your story and I love those little love tips at the end!
yellowcamaro
2009-07-09 . chapter 10
*sniffles* yeah, take that disney!
Tanoshimi
2009-06-20 . chapter 10
This was probably one of the best fanfictions that I have ever read! Nice plot and happy ending. It gives me inspiration to make more effort on my writing. And I believe that I've become a KibaSaku follower again.
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