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ThorHammer17 7/21/09 . chapter 1
Men in Tights much?
I read it, so I am of course reviewing it, but I don't know what to say. Crack is whack? Be above the influence!

Chastity belt? Really?
NexusTehULF0o 11/30/08 . chapter 1
LOL That was entertaining. XDD I never thought of Fire Emblem being as funny in THAT sort of way... But I definitely liked it. Ima gonna go check out some more of your other fics...

Nexus
Ceann de lasair 8/4/08 . chapter 1
Poor Robin of Loxley, I mean Ephraim.
Dionysus S 4/18/08 . chapter 1
Tana needs to watch her mouth! How DARE she insult my dear Ephraim? XD But I feel bad for the man, man...Jesus, he had to go through all that ranting? XD; I think he should just go find Innes and have awesome SEXORZ.

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XD Sorry about that. XD I love this (and the pairing, of course), it was funny. LAWLZ.

ASK
Fire Emblem MewMew 4/14/08 . chapter 1
That...was strange, but funny! It's written very well.
Ceres 82.1 4/14/08 . chapter 1
Nice one..hehe..

Tana has a chastity belt? And she's a Pegasus Knight? I wonder how her Pegasus can transport her, much less fight with her..hehe..
themagebear 4/13/08 . chapter 1
ok, kinda. the idea was good, but its all just reiterating that tana is ranting, which doesn't move the plot at all. you could have gotten the same result with about a quarter of the words.
remember, only use what you have to. not enough, and it leaves the reader unsatisfied. too much padding, and your reader gets bored.
drachemeister 4/13/08 . chapter 1
LOL

I've never read a fic about the things. So different, so funny XD

But realistically speaking (which means nothing in a fic), he could've just broken the thing :P
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