 ThorHammer17 7/21/09 . chapter 1Men in Tights much?
I read it, so I am of course reviewing it, but I don't know what to say. Crack is whack? Be above the influence!
Chastity belt? Really? |
 NexusTehULF0o 11/30/08 . chapter 1LOL That was entertaining. XDD I never thought of Fire Emblem being as funny in THAT sort of way... But I definitely liked it. Ima gonna go check out some more of your other fics...
Nexus |
 Ceann de lasair 8/4/08 . chapter 1Poor Robin of Loxley, I mean Ephraim. |
 Dionysus S 4/18/08 . chapter 1Tana needs to watch her mouth! How DARE she insult my dear Ephraim? XD But I feel bad for the man, man...Jesus, he had to go through all that ranting? XD; I think he should just go find Innes and have awesome SEXORZ.
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XD Sorry about that. XD I love this (and the pairing, of course), it was funny. LAWLZ.
ASK |
 Fire Emblem MewMew 4/14/08 . chapter 1That...was strange, but funny! It's written very well. |
 Ceres 82.1 4/14/08 . chapter 1Nice one..hehe..
Tana has a chastity belt? And she's a Pegasus Knight? I wonder how her Pegasus can transport her, much less fight with her..hehe.. |
 themagebear 4/13/08 . chapter 1ok, kinda. the idea was good, but its all just reiterating that tana is ranting, which doesn't move the plot at all. you could have gotten the same result with about a quarter of the words.
remember, only use what you have to. not enough, and it leaves the reader unsatisfied. too much padding, and your reader gets bored. |
 drachemeister 4/13/08 . chapter 1LOL
I've never read a fic about the things. So different, so funny XD
But realistically speaking (which means nothing in a fic), he could've just broken the thing :P |