This was a really good story. It was very original! (Did I menton my name is Simone?)

I thought the underlying theme of people changing over the years really filled out the plot. And Francine helping Amanda, even if only briefly, was almost too good to be true. Nicely done.

Great plotline! It's nice seeing the girls "rescue" Lee from himself!

I liked the story. It would be interesting to have seen that guard take the time to upholster his gun and still be able to fire it.

Wow...Good plot..Good flow...and Good characterization...in other words Good story!

This was a fun story, but it's very hard to read lots of screwy punctuation marks. Word processing programs put in curly quotes and fancy dashes, which look good in a printout, but become garbage in ASCII text. When you're writing for the web, it's probably best to just turn those features off to start with)

Enjoyed reading this one again Hope you have a new one soon.