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Reviews For: The Heroic Adventures of Captain Vanilla

Slade's Icy Apprentice
2008-08-27
ch 1,
abuselmfao! ok that was priceless. I laughed so hard at the end.

"Who the hell is Captain Vanilla?"

Hilarious!
ahming
2008-07-15
ch 1,
abuseI laughed through the entire thing. I LOVED it! I love that you paired Mikey and Leo up, I've never really seen that done. And you make them go together SO well. I love all the stall-talk Mikey gives throughout the entire story.. Lmfao, then Raph, at the end, "Who the hell is Captain Vanilla?" PRICELESS! I've added this to my favorites.
VixenOfTheWolves
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abuseOh my GOD! That was frikken hilarious!! I couldn't stop smirking the whole way through! It got me some really weird looks too...
Lil Ole Me 97
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseWhat an awesome fic! Hahaha, seems like Leo finally figured out which buttons to push with Mikey! Captain Vanilla?!? OMG! And the bullwhip, that was simply amazing... I simply LOVED how Mikey kept describing Leo with ninja qualities! 'Leonardo Takes His Obsession with Ninja Everywhere, Even in Bed' :) Thank you so much for writing this absolutely fantastic story!
ChibiLover123
2008-04-14
ch 1,
abuse...That last part made me LAUGH! Great job!^^
WallPhantom
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseOH SHI- I think I broke something. >_@
F-ing HILARIOUS. I snorted milk all over my keyboard at the "Book of Sin" line, and Mike's last rant. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.
youkodoll
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is great! I couldn't stop laughing,even now as am writing this my spleen is killing me! Dear lord, you killed me good.
Sewer Slider
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuse*twenty minutes later, is finally coherent enough to leave a review* That was just class! Awkwardness, teasing and unexpected bullwhips, who knew you could mix them and make a reallyl GOOD story?

I love Raph and Donnie's additions though (and cracked up when I found who was responsible for the extra item in the date night bag), especially at the end.

Nice work!!
KriStALKaLEi
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseThis story was comic GENIUS! I love how you portray Mike...less annoying, more funny. I couldn't stop laughing the whole way through except for when Leo went off about being boring. Talk about harsh! Anyway, this was a really amusing read. So faving.
Raphshell
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuselol that was great. Hilarious as always :)
DarkRaven18
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseoh my god...you had me at the Henry Higgins reference XD this was amazing on so many levels (Captain Vanilla is the best superhero name...ever), I laughed for a good five mintues to my roommates confusion lol Love it!!
Nekotsuki
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuse::has lost the ability to be coherent, honest::

Gold. Pure GOLD. XD So awesome.
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