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| ILuvWrtng 2008-06-16 ch 9,  | abuseIt's sad to see it 'end'. However I love the ending, it wrapped up nicely and the last lines were captivating. In those few lines your work reminded me of some of my own I haven't posted on here yet. I can't wait to go and read more of your work! |
| ILuvWrtng 2008-06-16 ch 8, | abuseOh I don't know WHAT exactly to say! I've loved this story so much, I'm a sucker for Obi-wan to begin with and I think your portrayal of the other Master was wonderful. I would LOVE to see the sequal; your work leaves me wanting for more! |
| Zoey Skywalker 11 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abuseAmazing story. Looking forward to the sequel. Keep up the great work! |
| Jedi Ani Unduli 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abusethat was terific! I loved the ending, & i hope that you've started on the sequel already Have lotsa fun! |
| Ann Jinn 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abuseGreat story, and am looking forward to the sequel. |
| Darth KenObi-Wan 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abuseYay! Lovely ending! :D Well done! |
| szepilona10 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abuseGreat story! I loved it! Thank you for writing it! God Bless! ~Szepilona10~ |
| O Draconian Devil 2008-06-10 ch 9, | abuseYay! Obi-Wan's back at the Temple. Is the sequel set when he is still ten or will it be later? Can't wait to see what you've planned for him and judging from the title, he's going to be a victim of the dark side again... poor little Obi :) It was a very nice story and I really did enjoy his journey. Please find a beta reader though, because I do spot some grammar and punctuation mistakes throughout. I like and please make him as cute and sweet as he is in this story! |
| PadawanMom 2008-06-10 ch 5, | abuseSurprisingly I really like this story. It has captured my imagination. Keep up the great work! |
| crystal-chan 2008-06-08 ch 8, | abuseXD yeah! you have to have a sequel! Update soon. This is just too cute for words. |
| windlg 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuseupdate soon |
| Lady Prince 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuseOh I love this! It's so cute! I couldn't stop giggling! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Harm Marie 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuseI think that it would be funny if Obi-Wan was a rebel. |
| Jedi Ani Unduli 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abusei liked it...make obi slide out of the bed & onto the floor...thought it was great when you made him laugh & talk baby-like, should i continue my stories? do more? please mention which ones you'd think i'd do well at |
| Darth KenObi-Wan 2008-06-02 ch 8, | abuseThat ending was so cute! Please do post the sequel! And please update soon! |