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| Moonprincess92 2008-07-13 ch 7,  | abuseI loved every single one. Every person you sorted, you sorted exactly how i imagine (well, except for Rose, who i see as a Ravenclaw, but you wrote her so well, it's all right she's a Gryffindor). Either way, shot. I loved it. |
| Bottled Sunshine 2008-07-03 ch 7, | abuse*sigh* That was great-- I loved it =D Keep writing- ~Bottled Sunshine |
| RJLupinFan 2008-07-02 ch 7, | abuseI loved this! Great work, Scorpius and Teddy were refreshingly different! |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 7, | abuseI like how he goes from deep thoughts to really basic ones, like "I need to pee!" I liked his compromised hair colour Just a little error I spotted: "half the students had each other because of the house they’re put in." I think you meant hate 5redroses* |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 6, | abuseI kinda feel sorry for him :( Just a couple of points: 1. "A little way away, Albus Potter’s stood, pale and nervous looking, beside Rose Weasley, who’s staring at the hat so hard it looks like she’s trying to burn holes in it." you changed tenses in this sentence 2. You wrote something like "I'll just go round jinxes everbody" it should be jinxing Hope I don't sound too picky :) 5redroses* |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 5, | abuse"I then spent a few minutes – to distract myself – picking out all the red-heads at the table. Because mostly they're relatives, not because I have a strange fascination with red hair." Heh, that made me laugh :) |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 4, | abuseO, I didn't expect that, he wanted to be in slytherin? Cool plot idea. |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseThat little fibber! :) By the way, the line: "See? My Grandma’s way better than yours." for some reason reminded me of My milkshake brings all the boys to the yard... heh random |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abuseAww, didums! Hugo is so sweet! |
| 5redroses 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThe hat said I was going to earn this, and I believe it. Even if I don’t make a habit of listening to hats, usually. That made me laugh :p |
| Elisabeth Canden 2008-05-12 ch 7, | abuseThis one was really funny, a real joy to read it, thanks for the good moment |
| Drusilla Braun 2008-05-03 ch 7, | abuseTeddy got analyzed by a hat. Thats great. I really enjoyed this. Great job. |
| Hephzibah Valour 2008-05-03 ch 7, | abuseaw i love teddy! ive never really gave much thought as to what house he would be in, though. but i think gryffindor would be nice for him =) |
| I'myoursweetestgoodbye 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abuseI liked this one...really good. |
| MBP 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abuseWow. This one was really fascinating. I love this new view of Teddy. I'd imagine a kid in his situation would have a lot of defense mechanisms (Harry did too, just in a different way). I also love the way you show glimpses of his vulnerabilities. He really does love Victoire already, doesn't he. :) |