Reviews for Twice the Revenge

Reviews For: Twice the Revenge

blackflame28 2008-04-16 ch 2,	abuseTo be honest, I had a hard time reading it. The ending seemed like a cop out, as if you were justifying why you made the characters so OOC. Not to be harsh, but it looks like you just googled BSC and then plugged in names where the original story was created. Btw- Karen Pike... there is no such character. It's either Karen Brewer or any of the Pike kids, such as Margo or Claire. I'm sure if you re-shaped the story, it could be an interesting original, but I'm having a hard time buying it as a BSC fanfic.
Veni Yan Cari 2008-04-16 ch 2,	abuseEh... the ending was rather abrupt, and just seemed like a way to connect it all to the BSCverse. It's a good concept for original fanfiction, and I think the story would be a lot better if you didn't limit it to the Baby-Sitter's Club.
xxevereverafter 2008-04-16 ch 2,	abuseI liked this story, really interesting and surprising ending(:
Ginnyloveslife 2008-04-14 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was surprising. Didn't expect THAT haha. Anyway, it is a very interesting idea. You write well. Maybe you could make Eric and Stacey hook up, maybe Stacey made Eric and Kristy break up because she secretly liked Eric. But, PLEASE update soon... I am waiting.
The Lovely Lizzy 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseHmm... I'm going to say this bluntly: I'm not sure how exactly this is a fanfic and not an original work. The only BSC-related things I see is that you have a town named Stoneybrook and characters named Kristy and Stacey, and they are both about as OOC as you can get, with the being polar opposites of how the BSC Kristy and Stacey were, and with the addition of nonexistant siblings. You might want to edit for grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. Sorry I'm not exactly all sunshine-and-roses, but this is sort of an odd thing to post as a fanfiction when it doesn't seem that way.

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