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| marialisa 2008-04-19 ch 2,  | abuseGo Flack! Love how he didn't pull his punches with Danny (literally and metaphorically!). Fantastic final line. |
| nikki.02 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseAww good continuation! Loved Flack's last lines to Danny. Update? |
| the british kid 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseany chance you'll write another chapter?...i love FM!...=) |
| JennCorinthos 2008-04-16 ch 2, | abuseGo FLACK! Loved this... Great chapter... I can not wait to read more... JENNIFER |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-04-16 ch 2, | abuseGo Flack...he is so right...maybe he didn't deserve him... I hate Danny and part of me hopes she never goes back to him but part of me hopes Danny proves to her it was a one time thing and that he should get a 2nd chance because it was a mistake and he will never do it again... guess we will see... Great job! I hope you continue this... |
| pinkyzq 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abusewow...it's good...i like flack being so protective of lindsay...so, will there be any sequel to this story?? just asking... |
| laurzz 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseWhat is this i feel.? A squee? How i've missed the squees! I LOVE Flack in your fic.! Please let him kick Dannys ass. Or stella. He needs a kick into touch! I loved the line "You see all of this wet that’s barely drying on my shirt? That’s from Lindsay’s tears"... Very Flack :) I hope you carry on.! I'll definetly read it :) |
| kabwnb 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseOh SHIT!! hehe Flack ripped him a new one. hehe Go Don!! Danny is such an ass. |
| cbarkins 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseYea, it was nice seeing Danny get knocked on his A$$ but somehow I don't feel satisfied. I really want him to feel the loss, but I guess we'll all just see what happens. But this helped a lot. I know I feel a little better. Thank you :) |
| lemmingduck 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseBravo. If there is one thing Danny could use right now is a punch in the face. Love your story. I really hope Lindsay doesn't take him back. |
| Sweetcheeksncis 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseGreat great chapt! Loved it! Well written and glad Danny got punched! He soo deserved it! Again, Great story and love it! |
| Angel of the Night Watchers 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseWell, i don't know if it made you feel better, but it made me feel better to know that Danny got punched in the face! Great story~ I love it |
| TessaStarDean 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseI really enjoyed this chapter. Don's outburst was believable and totally called for :) |
| Phyxsius 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWhat a great look at the friendship between Lindsay and Don. I, too, think he needs to hit Danny, if only to make himself feel better; I know right now I would!. ;-) |
| nikki.02 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAnother great post 4x16 fic! I love your descriptions in the first couple of paragraphs. Any chance you'll continue? |