I luv this story, it funny and has a really good plot, u should try and put some stuff bout sasuke in the the chapter though. But the story line is coming together, you've got some real talent, keep up the good work.

This looks good, cant wait to see what you do with it.

this story is interesting

really good can't wait to read more.

Update soon soon okay because this is on Hell of a story in a good way.

Is there anything that Miki can't do? lol.

It's all really confusing to me because I have never read Ironside or that other stories that you listed...

Whoa. All this information came in so quickly, so suddenly that I don't think that I am capable of processing it right. _

Miki is so much like you, that I am almost afraid to read on. It feels kinda like I'm invading your mind and privacy. lol.
How did Miki meet Aurora, Janice, Noel, and Danielle anyways?

I do like the story though, it feels carefree and upbeat.)

Quick question: what is Taz's gender? My brain tells me it's a guy but I can't be 100% on that, so maybe you could add a "he" or a "she" in the writing so the readers can tell.
I would also suggest describing the things that holds meaning. Like Zest, the teddy bear. When did Miki acquire Zest? What does Zest look like? -things like that.
And why are they moving? What does her mom do for a living? (since my first impression was that Maggie has had a rough life because she says "What the fuck is up with that?-or is she just careless to what she says in front of her adopted daughter?-Kate (Auphora66)

Okay this is really good but you spely fairy wrong. It's fairy not farey. Otherwise its really good!

i love it

It is an evil movie. 7 years and I'm still slightly scaered of clowns.

i love the story! please continue!

aw i wanted to read more please please update soon so yeah cool story!

please continue! i love the story and want to read more!