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BeckyCSI 6/7/08 . chapter 8
Saving Private Ryan is one of my favourite films so yay for that mention! Ahh i'm sad that its the end but you can't drag a story on for too long and i think this is the best place to end it
I liked the case, it was definitely different so it would be awesome if it was an actual episode! I also loved how you managed to add the extra personal bits, made for a great read :D

Well done!

Becky x
BeckyCSI 6/7/08 . chapter 7
Ohh and the plot thickens ;D lmao I could seriously see this as an actual case...probably in the future tho considering Sara's not preggo
I love how your managing to pull this together whilst still sticking to prompts and the personal as well as professional lives of Sara, Gil etc
Good work! I'm nearly all caught up!

Becky x
BeckyCSI 6/7/08 . chapter 6
Aw this was so fluffy :D :D :D
I loved the whole harmonious family, makes sense to me! Like i say to every geek baby fic, I wish I could see the kid! I bet he/she would be a damn cute baby
Another great chapter I'm really enjoying this, glad i got back to it!

Becky x
BeckyCSI 6/7/08 . chapter 5
And I return for a good read ;D Lol finally getting round to sorting my ff folder and reading new(ish) posts
Anyway...Holy freaking cow! Sara's gone into labor(Only read up to Ch. 5 btw lol I post reviews for each chapter) and Wendy and Hodges are going on a date!

Lmao i love that Fanfiction was mentioned in this one, especially the fact that Hodges was writing it!
Great chappy D Will read the rest in a bit...hopefully
Becky x
JellybeanChiChi 5/26/08 . chapter 8
Nice job. I loved the first part of this chapter the best. As always great job with the prompts. Jean
CSIGeekFan 5/26/08 . chapter 8
I've really loved reading this story. It made me sniffle as it came to an end. Well done.
ishotsherlock 5/26/08 . chapter 8
Oh great ending to this great story. cant wait to read your next work.

AKE:D
WalkerTRngr 5/20/08 . chapter 7
Another amazingly fantastic chapter!)
JellybeanChiChi 5/20/08 . chapter 7
I feel so sorry for Duncan.
That dream sequence was crazy. I read the line about the baby having the beard three times thinking, "I think Chauncey forgot a word somewhere in this sentence," because I knew the baby shouldn't have a beard, but I could picture it with the beard. And the fangs and the weird children tying up Sara. Then I was like, "Oh, it was a dream. Thank God. I thought Chauncey got a hold of a bad batch of asparagus or something." That dream would have freaked me out too.
Nice job.
ishotsherlock 5/20/08 . chapter 7
Another great chapter. Loved the dream, apart from the Natalie part. cant wait for thew next exciting chapter.

AKE:D
ishotsherlock 5/14/08 . chapter 6
great chapter. love that you brought the rollercoaster into the story.

AKE:D
ayesha-s 5/13/08 . chapter 6
wonderful chapter!
WalkerTRngr 5/13/08 . chapter 6
Lovely!)
JellybeanChiChi 5/6/08 . chapter 5
Contractions and a broken toe? Chauncey, that is just cruel? I hope she's not like me and vomits during labor. That would just be the cherry on top, ehh? Nice job.

Oh, and I always saw Hodges as more of a "Felicity" fan fiction writer. That or "Veronica's Closet."
ayesha-s 5/6/08 . chapter 5
great chapter!
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