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| supersaiyanx 2008-07-11 ch 6, | abuseA great chapter! Hope that you will update soon. |
| Mrs. Dom Masbolle 2008-07-05 ch 6, | abuseAHAHAHA...WOO HOO! lol... i love the last bit... how casually Darcy admitted he loved lizzy and how lizzy is pretty much in love with him... or at least in lust with him.. lol.. please update sooN! |
| LoraineSouza 2008-07-02 ch 6, | abuseuahuhauhuh the last two lines r hilarious lol i can totally imagine that hauhauhuahu cant wait for future chaps take care Loraine |
| MAB35 2008-07-01 ch 6, | abuseWild, and wonderful. More, please. |
| wren 2008-07-01 ch 3, anon. | abuseI agree that the cursing detracts one from the story. It's all I'm really reading. It would be a much better story without so much cursing. |
| JoJo2753 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseHAHA! love it! Cant wait for more! update soon please! |
| MariahDezie 2008-06-30 ch 6, | abuseLovee it! It cracked me up how Darcy is all "Yeah" when charlie said he was in love with her. Update soon. |
| supersaiyanx 2008-06-21 ch 5, | abuseA great chapter- hope another is on its way soon! |
| MariahDezie 2008-06-19 ch 5, | abuseOmg haha this chapter was awesome. It cracked me up. Update soon! |
| LoraineSouza 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abuselol hauhuahuahua love it! oo have u noticed that in all stories darcy always has a perfect bod? huahuauh i guess we just always think of him as the perfect man lol anyways take care Loraine |
| anon 2008-05-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseYou said it is based on "Can You Keep a Secret?" but that you never read it. While you may not have read the whole book it definitely seems as though you at least read the first 2 chapters. I don't mind you taking some of the "secrets" from Kinsella's book, but give her credit for them at the end of the chapter. Otherwise, no matter what your intent, it is in fact plagiarism. |
| skittleysweet 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseomg hahahah a meeting! lol meeting his johnson that is lol jkjk update asap! |
| supersaiyanx 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseIt has been a while since you last updated! A great chpter though, update soon. |
| MariahDezie 2008-05-15 ch 4, | abuseLol! This chapter was hilarious at the end when Lizzy walked in on Jane and Charlie. Update soon! |
| JoJo2753 2008-04-28 ch 3, | abuseThis is funny... I hope you update soon?! |