friendship doesn't happen that fast. it doesn't go from hate to holding hands and comforting each other. wouldnt it be nice if it did, but that's just too fast for a true friendship to form and grow

Really, great job. Very nice poetry anecdotes and well developed plot line. Your dialogs can be embellished a little, but good imagery. Quite excellent :D

That's...

Sad.

I'm sorry I missed the last couple of chapters - life has just been a tad chaotic. Again, apologies - but I'm here now!

Lovely job. I will really miss reading this story!

that is fabulous. it sure ended with a bang didn't it? great story, a round of applause to you. cheers, mate.

I loved it as usual. But is that the end or are you going to do an epilogue. Cause that would be great. A summary of what everyone else is doing after James and Lily's deaths. I look forward to whatever you decide! = )

I really like it!

I like your name too!

Ah! A cliffhanger?!?! No! Please update again soon. I wamt to know what happens. = )

omg i love it!

Aww- that was cruel!

I can't wait to find out what happens!

:)

Aww- it's cute!

Not brilliant with the kids yet, huh?

cool chapter, you got a lot of ground covered. a few notes, switch sympathy and empathy in the chapter 20 add-on, you have them mixed up; Dorcas' death was EXTREMELY sudden, but it was okay, Remus' reaction could've been done a bit better, and maybe have a better (meaning longer and with more remus-angst) transition between "my love is dead!" to "lily are you pregnant?"
I liked the whole string on intruded private moments, that was cool. and yeah, that's pretty much it. talk to ye later! cheers.

Loved this chapter! It did seem a little rushed, but oh well. It was still great. Looking forward to your next update! = )

it is a great story told
i just have no idea how you know if the next chapter has already updated!!
but for futer chapters don't put the poetry in, i mea it isn't bad it's just not part of the story

dun dun dun! Oh my gosh, who will she pick? Loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one!

lol, that last part was a total Friends rip-off. did you lift that "furry little problem" thing directly from the book? -raises eyebrows-
hoho, face hardening at mention of tonks! very intriging...
will read on at chapter 21.