Damnit! T_T I wish I was that woman

hot damn, now that is how you write a Barricade sex scene!

Everything about this story was phenomenal
The concept, your depictions of the characters (they so worked), their dialogue (yay well written witty banter), the sex (hot damn!), and the overall progression of events (even the flashbacks).

I couldn’t help but imagine Dinobot’s voice when ever he called her “vermin”

Wow.
I must say this is truly an erotic read. The nature of both the characters are so dark and twisted, it's not unbelievable they would find each other somehow.

I say I love how you use Barricade's mech form. I love seeing the challenge in that while they are with humans. So challenging and, I don't know...

I just happy to have read this story. I despise Lilah with a passion and I love Barricade. These two were meant for each other. Definitely.

Wonderful. Hope to read more from you!

Oh, I'm impressed. Lilah/Barricade works so well. I wouldn't have thought of it myself but it just makes so much sense! I liked that you didn't compromise the true dark nature of their characters. Certainly this has to be one of the most eye-opening and erotic reads that I've come across in a while. I can only hope you'll grace us will more in this fandom.

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Holy. Crap.
Um, I'm really red in the face right now. That was really well done. I'm glad how you kept Barricade in his true form and not a holoform or something. That was very challenging and you did a areally good job with it! :-D

-Ray