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| mendenbar 2008-05-23 ch 6,  | abuseWish these chapters were a little longer and more developed - not so "in your face" with the facts. A little exposition goes a long way to fleshing out a story. Still, write and I shall read. |
| mendenbar 2008-05-13 ch 5, | abuseInteresting story if sort of disjointed. Still I'll stick around for awhile. P.S. it is niece, not neice. |
| mendenbar 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseIf Cordy is going with Lorne to Caritas because it is closer and she gave Angel the directions over the phone, how is it that she can babysit Connor and shout instructions as Angel is on his way out the door? And don't tell me you really meant Doyle, 'cause he was dead long before Gunn showed up. |
| maipigen 2008-04-21 ch 4, | abusegotta have me some more Doyle;) update soon;) |
| RabidReject 2008-04-15 ch 3, | abuseShort but good. More soon! |
| RabidReject 2008-04-14 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. More soon please. |