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Reviews For: A Beautiful Thing

Second daughter of Eve
2008-06-11
ch 8,
abuseAh, fluffy.
Miss Pookamonga
2008-05-23
ch 8,
abuseThis story was so cute! I'm so glad I found it. :) I love Kit/Stirling--it's absolutely adorable, and I think you captured it pretty well. I love the kiss, and I love Stirling's last line--hahahaha! That was hilarious...such an un-Stirlingish thing to say XD But cute! Great job!

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga ;-P
MaxRideFan35
2008-05-02
ch 8,
abusecute! i have read all the american girl books and i think almost all the girls have boys that would be their future boyfriends. but american girl authors don't put even any slight romance cuz there for younger kids too...ok im rambling on and this doesn't have anything to do with it, sorry. anyway, very good keep writing!
rhapsodyflower
2008-04-30
ch 8,
abuseReally, really, REALLY cute!
Old-Fashioned Girl22
2008-04-15
ch 5,
abuseThis is a very great story. You put the details in just like the books, and it's realistic. Wow. It's almost like I AM reading a professional Kit book!
I think you have lots of promise for a writer. Your imagination amazes me. I really, truly hope you continue this (or else I will DIE OF A BROKEN HEART! GASP!) I would like you to know that if you need any help, or just wanna talk to a fellow writer PM me.
Supporting (and impatiently waiting)
~*Old-Fashioned Girl22*~
loulouthesweet
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseAwesome, Hannah! I can't wait till the rest of the story!
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