Wow. Awsome poem. I can sort of see the story in it, too. I love how you portrayed your character so well with just a few words.

I like how, at the end, it seems that Anais Nin conquers the volcano almost as a challenge to Raem, to show that she will not back down no matter what the world may throw at her.

Particular phrases that stood out: "Sea-maid", "ferry nears the brink", "promenade", "barricade"

Good work, as always.