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| tasha 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just have to say again how much I love this story. I'm re-reading it, and can't help laughing every few seconds. I LOVE the bit with Jack and Donna eavesdropping! They are SUCH a pair! Seriously - Jack has met his match with Donna. I love them, and you've got them perfectly. And aww they're having the most adorable little shower convo! It's SO sweet! “It’s disgusting,” Donna puts in cheerfully. LMFAO!! I LOVE that woman!! Oh and then she KISSES him! I wish I had an extra special favourites section, because this would be in my top five. I fucking love it. Hope this cheers you up! (When you finally get your internet back XD) |
| xxCee-Gisborne-Cullenxx 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG that is amazingly well written not to mention pure genious. the best one i think ive read lately! chanel xx |
| Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuse*laughs hysterically* poor rose and the doctor, funnly enough i do believe that could happen in the series... |
| Terrifica Oneiroi 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI've had those kinds of little bunnies in my head ever since I found out Donna was going to be on board, but then to throw in Martha and Jack and Jackie! :) I love your interruptions, they're so classic! Kudos. |
| stargirlsidle 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseaw, wow, that's my new favourite! i love the idea of them all being on the TARDIS together lol brilliant story :) |
| Simply Lily 2008-04-17 ch 1, | abuse“Doctor, you wouldn’t happen to be in Rose’s bed, would you?” “Absolutely not,” a muffled voice informs her, and the pillow moves ever so slightly. “I’m fixing the internal gravitical anomaly stabiliser in the kitchen.” Tee hee hee. No, seriously, I cannot read that without bursting into childish silly giggles. My brain turns to mush. "I'm off to do some repair work" - HA! You will forever be my favorite DW writer; you always nail that bittersweet-funny-heartbreaking-silly essence of the show. And your Doctor is, I swear, sometimes better and more in character than in the actual show! Not to mention, ROSE! Rose is always good to have... As for the rest of the Full House - I do hope you'll make it a pattern of shacking all these people together. I just wanted them to keep talking forever and ever in that witty way of theirs while making the Doctor uncomfortable. LOVED IT! |
| NewDrWhoFan 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseWell done! I love how everyone else is making their own assumptions and rolling their eyes at them, but the Doctor and Rose have hardly had even a moment together :) Oh, and nice ending ;) |
| Genne 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI really am finding it hard to say which part i liked best. I can see so much of it happening...makes you feel really sorry for the doctor and rose in advance! gah, poor everyone! lol. The end is brilliant though!! Loved it! if that doesn't happen in the episode then so help me... |
| Ramona- Theta 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseAmazing. This is fantastic. Brillant. Ramona-Theta |
| Raxacoricofallapatorius 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseLove it!! Made me laugh, which was just what I needed! Really good, please write more like this! xx |
| Gilari 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow, this is SO good! It had me laughing so many times! Please tell me you are going to write another chapter! After all, Rose and the Doctor will want more time alone in the TARDIS, and they won't be able to find it! Pretty please? This was fantastic. |
| Star-of-Chaos 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseLOL! Poor Doctor. Poor Rose. Even more poor Doctor for having Jackie on the TARDIS. |
| Nicole Gruebel 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseLovely! :) |
| Duchessa of Bellezza 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI FREAKING LOVE THIS STORY!! Honestly, everything about this is P E R F E C T. This is the best fluff i've ever read in my entire life. Ever. The characterisation of everyone is just BRILLIANT, and the way you've got all these little bits where they nearly kiss and then they kiss at the end! And Jack's cheeky and Donna's hilaire and Martha's jealous and Rose is ROSE and then they KISS AT THE END AND I LOVE THIS STORY!! *squee* |
| Uh.yeah 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, beautiful. And also funny. A winning combination, really. I think it's a really fun take on the reunion scenario, having all the others running around and getting in the way. All the comedy, all the different companions etc. IC, while also creating really sweet moments between the Doctor and Rose. Plus, the idea of the Doctor wanting to constantly be with her is lovely and mushy. And I want you to know that I have never used the word "mushy" before, so it must be good. And dear lord, please don't let it actually take a pre-death situation for them to finally kiss... (Though knowing RTD, it'll be even worse than pre-death and the kiss will still be terminally interrupted. But let's be optimistic). Y'know, I kind of wish you did have RTD's power... Anywho, yesh, lovely fic indeed. It managed to hit just the write note of squee and funny. :D |