i love it so cute

Aw that was just adorable! I love that the way you write, you can make the image in a reader's head! I can so imagine them as little kids in love! Oh, and from your profile, Apocalyptica is awesome! Have you ever heard of Vitamin Records? They also do tributes to artists, with classical instruments. :)

That was really good. I really liked it!

ooh, so swet! :O

to giving a real? heart is a bit scary, freaky even :P

Is Bella the girl from the Grudge?

Haha.

Very cool and different from what you usually write but still good. Are they young in this story?

omg this was too cute! i can totally amagine lil 8 year old doing this!

I liked it. It was different but that was what made it really good.

For some reason Bella reminded me of a nicer sweeter Samara from the ring

But only I could think that

Loved the story

That was the cutest creepy story I've ever read. Reminds me of a few things, namely Gingerdead and Grim Tales from Down Below. Both are comics I read from time to time. The first an original comic that's often in haiku form (don't ask, it's cute) and the second is a Fan Comic for The Grim Tales of Billy and Mandy. Apparently Mandy grows up a blond bombshell and marries Grim. Somehow they have kids and the story's about them.

ANYWAY, your story made me think of those two comics and I thought I'd share. It was cute and creepy in a good way. Like Gingerdead's little motto: "Love is strange but so are we."

yeah i like this:) and i am randomly roaming your stories...heh, they're all well written

¡Aw! This story is cute, great, perfect...

It's pretty.

Congrats!

unique and adorable ((:

OMG1 This story was so CUTE!

I loved it!

good job, was pretty good!

This was a truel unique story. I enjoyed it very much.