Reviews for My Little Lamb

Reviews For: My Little Lamb

andaere 2008-06-22 ch 4,	abuseThis is a very good story, especially for it being your first 21 Jumpstreet story! The characterizations are good and belivable, the plot is great and interesting, and it's well-written. Oh, and you use proper grammar, something we haven't been getting much of nowadays. It's sad how many people don't know the difference between "you're" and "your". ;) I must say, the scene in the beginning with the Tom/Judy stuff and Tom drinking was amazing! I just have this THING for drunk!Tom. The only thing that confuses me is WHY Tom was drinking so much, and that Judy doesn't seem too worried about him. You made it sound like it's not the first time that he's drunk a lot, and so it seems like Judy would be a bit more worried. Oh, and it surprised me that Tom could still form coherent sentences and call Judy after four bottles of alcohol... xD But I'm just nitpicking. When I see great stories or stories with a lot of potential, I always nitpick so they can become even better. =) So, great job! I'm really excited to see how Tom will react to knowing that Dymphna is seriously sick. Also, the flashback scene was well-written and cool (it seemed slightly random, but I'm sure it has a purpose in the overall plot). One more thing: you're not going to have Tom get back up with his old flame, are you? Because Tom's seeming a bit... well... stalker-ish to me. I hope this will become a Tom/Judy fic or something, but, well... you're the boss. =) Please update soon! This is an amazing story!
mardijo 2008-05-15 ch 4,	abusegreat story so far, cant wait to see where you take it. seems like tommy's gonna have a bit of deja vu with this case.
LibraryTech 2008-05-11 ch 4,	abuseWe get a flash back dream...Well I guess Tom won't be feeling any better after he finds out how sick the girl is...up date soon.
Ghostwriter 2008-05-10 ch 4,	abuseAwesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
LibraryTech 2008-04-28 ch 3,	abuseI guess Tom will feel different when he finds out how sick the child really is...story going great..can't wait to read some more soon.
LibraryTech 2008-04-27 ch 2,	abuseHA HA..Tom just doesn't care about if she is married or have kids..I guess long as she still looks good..you are doing a good job keep it up.
Ghostwriter 2008-04-26 ch 3,	abuseI love it. Catch ya on the flip side.
Cuban Pirate Princess 2008-04-22 ch 2,	abusegood story i really like it
Nannii 2008-04-20 ch 2,	abuseGreat cahpter.. Update =D
Ghostwriter 2008-04-19 ch 2,	abuseAwesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
bearleft 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseNice job so far! I'm looking forward to reading more.
LibraryTech 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseYou have a good start to your story..I like Tom and Judy stories..can't wait to find out about old girlfriend and kid.
Ghostwriter 2008-04-13 ch 1,	abuseAwesome. Catch ya on the flip side.

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