Brilliant chapter!!

UPDATE!

please?

First of all...
YAYS.
Finally, something realistic.
I mean if I had a say if Lucas would've called and asked Peyton to go to Vegas with him, I'd make her say no. 'Cuz honestly, he can't make up his mind. Although I am happy with the Leyton ending...

Still lovin' it.

Despite me being a Leyton snob...I like this.

I really love this fic!!

I AM A TOTAL TOTAL NEYTON FANGIRL!...THAT'S MY #1 OTH SHIP OVERALL...Everything else for me is tied at #2

(Everything else being those other ships, alot UC, that I like...and Naley, Brathan & Jeyton ARE NOT ON THAT LIST OF SHIPS I LIKE..lol)

However to each their own, right?...lol

I read ur profile that you are really loving Pathan/Neyton ...that you ship heartedly LP & NH...but that has you kinda loving the NP since the LP & NH is something that you definitely get from the show.

At least your open to loving and embracing outside ships...it helps add variety to the OTH fandom.

AND NEYTON IS DEFINITELY A SHIP THAT SHOULD HAVE A WHOLE BUNCH MORE FICS THEN THEY GET :( lol

I LOVE THIS FIC...and i like the darker edge it has as well.

I AM JUST DYING FOR UPDATES!>...I GOT TO KNOW THAT MY BELOVED NEYTON GET BACK TOGETHER & WORK THINGS OUT!!...
They belong together!...lol

AND U R REALLY FANTASTIC AT WRITING NEYTON...I HOPE U DO MORE IN THE FUTURE!! :)
I bet if you did a NP fic taking from where S.3 started, u'd have a interesting take on it ;)

just a thought ;) lol

Seriously, keep up the great work...I realize writing these fics is hard & time consuming work & I'm jealous of all those who have the ability to write. DEFINITELY NOT EASY TO DO..lol

And i look forward to reading more...and seeing more Neyton :)

I love this story!

please update soon...this truly transcends fanfiction. excellent work.

First of all just so you know Lucas/Nathan and Peyton are those characters I love the most and I am hadrcore LP fan but I can ship NP any day(its weird I know)It's really hard to read because it broke my heart into pieces but I do know that I couldn't not read simply because I love them. The last part was leave me speechless and wow I didn't see that coming.Please keep writing I begging you lol seriously its killing me not knowing what gonna happen to NP :(

Another awesome chapter! Yay for Peyton putting herself in the line of fire and not letting Nathan go down alone. I'm so happy she did that. Lucas was such a dick outing Nathan the way he did. I understand he'd tell Haley, (even though technically Nathan didn't do anything wrong) because of the best friend relationship and all that, but he could have spoken to her in private. Of course it's much more dramatic this way which is good. LOL. But I so wanted Peyton to tell Brooke on her own, but still I'm anxious for her reaction. I already know and love Skills opinion on it. I'm glad that they have someobody on their side.

I really liked the Peyton/Brooke scene, except for all of Brooke's remarks about how that guy is a jerk and doesn't deserve Peyton if he can't understand and forgive her mistake. But of course Brooke will side with Peyton over some unknown. I was happy with Peyton's comebacks, clearly indicating that Nathan (or new guy) had every reason to be upset. I'm glad she's owning up to that.

I loved the Nathan/Lucas angst in the grocery store as well. I love tension with the brothers and you captured that perfectly.

My fave part is Peyton thinking to herself that she doesn't need saving anymore and how she credits Nathan for that. I never was a fan of the whole knight in shining armor relationship. So glad you added that in.

Great chapter as always. I'm so disappointed that there won't be an update for a while, but I'll be waiting for when it does come. You can blow work off can't you? LOL. Just kidding. Sort of.

First of all, if I haven't said it before, I think your style of writing, phrasing, everything is absolutely phenomenol. I can't believe the amazing talent you have for writing. It seems like professional writing and I have to say, I don't think even a professional could write any better. I am in complete awe of your skills. It's simply unbelievable and I am so glad that you're not strictly a Leyton, Naley or Brucas writer as I am not keen on any of those couples, and I sure don't want to miss out on your writing.

Now for the chapter. I loved it as always. I'm still on team Nathan, because he was the one who got hurt, but I'm glad to know that Peyton finds herself regretting her decision. I love that she made him a sketch and left it for him to find under her pillow.

I also love that Nathan made her breakfast, despite how angry he still is with her, and the whole back story on that. I love reading about their high school years and you wrote it, like everything else, perfectly.

The phone conversation between Nathan and Peyton was great. I love all the emotions you're able to convey and I also like how Peyton can see right through Nathan. I don't know how they're going to work this out but I look forward to findind out.

i wish you had all the time to write more! thnx for this, i love reading your writing

That was an awesome update... I especially loved the end and I can't wait to see the reactions from Haley and the rest of them after Peyton's confession.

I'm so glad she stood up for him!

OMG!
iam glad peyton stood up for herself&nathan!! so cute!! and the icecream place! <3! cant wait till you update soon!
please and thank you:)