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| The Great Valley Guardian 2008-05-11 ch 1,  | abuseOf course...Flame is on another adventure...but those three bandits just wanna die don't they? I guess those knocks to the head made them even stupider than before Flame knocked them out. |
| Tomoyo Kinomoto 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuse*laugh* Well, I can't say I know Mystery Dungeon that well, (or at all) but this is still good. After all, Flame is Flame! *grins* |
| scarlet pikachu 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseDon't p*ss off the kickass Charmander... Never p*ss Flame off! I'm actually quite intimidated by Flame myself. |
| Novak 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusei liek it, hope there will be more |
| ell975 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abusegood story buwaro, but is it any coincidence that two of the bandits where the same as franks pokemon? |
| nightdragon0 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abuseYup, Flame wouldn't be Flame without his usual ethnics: bad language and his middle claw salute. Oh, and he actually likes the fedora. Well, maybe that's an expected change in the MD world. It's pretty interesting that you explain the mechanics of the game in a sort of 'real-life' situation. |
| Dark Magician Girl Aeris 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseYou know, I'm starting to think you have a difficult time with the idea of a 'one-shot' or something... |
| Blaze ocean dragon 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked your explanation of the orb-type thingies, which could also explain why the 99 floorers are such pains in the ass. Although what could be so powerful in the Joyous Tower that it sucks everyone's strength AND screws with the orbs, who knows. And Flame kicks the asses of three insanely stupid pokemon... who rather resemble Frank's, actually. Only he had a Kadabra instead of a Sandslash, I believe. |
| Azure Inu 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseNice. I always wondered how you would deal with Mystery Dungeon. |
| Ri2 2008-04-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh. This Flame guy is pretty tough. Why's he going it solo, though? |
| bentley the great 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseFlame just can't help being a smart ass in a fight can he? Great story by the way. |