this is cool when you going to update?will they see each other again? tell me! :D

aw man, are you ever going to update this? this book rocks!

I just started reading this tonight (about time, right? XD ) and I promise I'll leave a more thorough review when I've caught up to the end but I just wanted to make a comment before I forget!

I'm loving the novelty of this entire story! It's insightful and refreshing, and so true to the characters! But the point I wanted to make about this particular chapter, is that I am cheering on the inside about Lex aka Leo growing into himself, finding it in him to LEAD. I was a little skeptical about him, at first. Of the four, your Leo felt the least like MY Leo--but now I'm realizing that wasn't the case at all. He just hadn't found out who he really was yet! In spite of his initial fondness for humans, it is Leo who incites action amongst them, and it gives me thrills!

You should come back to writing this fic soon. *nods*

More later! And cheers to you for a fantastic story thus far! It has held me riveted!

KameTerra

Oh I do you update soon, I'm really interested!

Hey I'm really enjoying this =) Nice work on the characters and I like the way the story is going =D Well done, can't wait for more =D

amazing story! I hope you'll update this again soon!

hehe. Sounds like Raphie.

O.o Black and red? I'm clueless. The reason? I have utterly no idea. XD A-a-a-anyways, protesters? This'll be interesting...

I am so-o-o-o-o-o sorry about not reviewing this in so long! I was a bit side-tracked and I thought that I had already reviewed it and I- am... making up excuses. -_-;

S.B.n

Is it a protest group?
Eve

Lol. Raph doesn't even know that those humans are trying to HELP him. Poor guy, hunger strikes are painful. Another excellent chapter! Kreep it up! :):):)

ok. Im going crazy. what the HECK was that thing he saw in the end. I say it was splinter. who else would it be other than splinter. red and black like his robes...what other character would it be other than splinter who wears red and black?

love the images of the brothers that he knows arnt real.

the hunger strike of raph's is his way of rejecting the humans. he would rather starve and suffer than take anything from the ones who took everything from him. very powerful. is he drinking? i heard people die of dehydration first before dying from hunger. kills the kidneys.

the protestors are an intresting twist. what EXACTLY are they protesting? free them to their natural habitat?? if so what IS their natural habitat? or do they want them to be together...if so...why did this suddenly become an issue?? is it something that the other brother's cooked up in their own way of defiance?

too many questions need to be answered.

answer them.

tri

Oh, protesters! That's awesome that some people want them all back together, wether it was because Don or Leo talked about it or some other way. But the last two lines of this; I'm intrigued now. Also, clueless.

Is it a protest? Well in that case

UNITE THE MUTANTS!

Cool chapter, but now I'm beginning to worry about Raph... Not eating is not good. :(

So at first I thought that the group of people were ninjas too, but I got it now... Protestors!... and maybe a Foot Ninja? Ut oh!
So this chapter was all that much better by the fact that I am in my first day in my first year of college and it is really nice to have something familiar to go to. I got up this morning and saw the new chapter alert and knew that even though my mom hasn't e-mailed me yet and I don't really know anyone... I've still got something familiar. (Although if anyone sees my TMNT decked out room I am sure to get made fun of :P)
Great job on this chapter. KUTGWUS
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"...And what was worse was that he'd probably -welcome- that final oblivion. It was better than this purgatory of knowing what he could have and not having it. It was better than knowing what joy was... and suffering too. It was better than those dark days when he hated his brothers almost as much as the humans. For having been there. For being exactly what he needed."

Yes.

! Guh, so perfect. This is well-handled angst at its best.

Ah, finally, humanity has grown a conscience. But Raph is heading downhill fast... eep.

Black, then red. Black and red... the Foot? *bites nails nervously* You continually manage to surprise me with this fic, it's wonderful!

I'd be plenty happy to give you more comments for this online, but I'm on the university computers right now and I'm about to be late to class. *skedaddles*