BWHAHAHA! ZACK CRACKED ME UP! OMG

I was listening to the shuffle on my ipod during this scene and aqua's theme from birth by sleep came on. I was like are you serious right now?lol It made me cry and I'm loving this story right now

wait an effing second O_o Angeal uses a katana and is still alive? D: what happened to the,"My honour and dreams...their yours now Zack...", I mean you hafta explain how Zack even got the Buster Sword in the first place now...though I need to read like another 1020 chapters before i can find out what did you really plan for -w-

short and filler it may be, but absolutely adorable is a definite _-coos at the cuteness-almost falls from her chair laughing
sorry but Genesis playing daddy still brings me to stitches...-holds her sides gasping
he makes such an awkward father...-waves a finger at Aerith
shame one you missy! you got killed by a psycho, and now that you go brought back to life your running around all alone, geez, just wear a sign that says "kill me" why don't you...-shudders
I had a scarey thought... your not gonna have Demyx and Danni attacked in Costa are you?

Mizu

I am deeply enjoying this story. The amount of feeling is wonderful. Also, I cannot wait to see where you go from here.

wow! you haven't posted a chapter of this since the end of November! I had almost forgotten about this story... good thing I have it on alert otherwise I really would have forgotten
I feel bad for Danni, I hate being cold too. And yesh Kunsel ish smart _ they be big boys and as such should deal with their problems instead of everyone trying to keep them apart-glares
Gen-Gen has a squirt all his own! is Ang gonna succeed is getting them to come back with him? cause I really wanna see Gen's response to having a squirt! _-gives Zack and Cloud hugs
good boys, at least your playing nice _

Mizu

i would have reviewed,but i ain't go t nuttin ta sez

first off: YIPPIE! new chapter _

secondly..."She watched for another few moments before swinging her feet up and crossing them on the bed beneath her... Danni swung her legs up from over the side of the bed, slowly crossing them on the bed linen.
you more or less wrote the same line twice in the third paragraph
I do find the meeting room bit interesting... Demyx from Gaia? neat _

I do wanna knock those gigglers upside the head-glares at the annoying things
I never really liked the annoying characters very much... unless you torment them later for it _-coos at the ending of the chapter
Demy's trying to make it all better now _ cute!

also I don't know about anyone else but sometimes short chapters are easier to read then the long drawn out ones... I find it refreshing when an author gives a short chapter, the readings much lighter-pats on the back
you did good with this one, so try to focus on school and when you have decent time write if you feel like, but don't push yourself and you'll be fine.

so good luck and have fun!

Mizu

And so, the past is revealed. That's so sad T_T But Zexion... I love his reaction to suddenly realizing where Danni was. He really regrets that night, doesn't he? And... he reminds me of Cloud. AH! D We don't need another one of those! But he's just so CUTE when he's emotional! He needs something to lean on too D And his reaction to Danni's lack of anger towards him, it was heart-wrenching. Very nice.

I like Aishling! I have a friend named Aisling, pronounced like Ashlyn. I dunno if those are related in any way, but cool.

is it bad when you start imagining just how the looks one the characters faces are before your even a fourth of the way through the chapter?
I thought it was a lovely chapter just to let you know, kinda short but he I'm not complaining, you updated _ I thought something had happened to you and you were stopping the story or something along those lines

course knowing life you were just busy with something like school, work, or family. that's my guess anyway _ wel there is also the possiblitiy of writers blocks _ I've got a nasty case of artist block and haven't een able to draw much of anything for over a year now... wish my inspiration would come back from whatever hole it's hiding in T_T

oh yeah I did like the flashes with Demyx's returning memory, it's very nice, and oddly enough even though a part of me like Zexion I was glad you had him hit sometimes a character just needs a god smack in the face before everything can get a little better... Dem's probably gonna slug him in the face instead, if he doesn't try to kill him like Vexen... O_O owie

um... I'll stop running at the mouth now still a good chapter and looking forward to the next one.

Mizu

... I dunno what to say... except AWESOME. I love Zexion now, a LOT. I love how he finally realized that he has emotions D And how horrible he feels about what happened... And even that he was angry that Roxas would even think that he had betrayed them. And Angeal, he promised... that was funny D I can just imagine him jumping up and striding towards the door, and hearing a loud bump as Danni ran after him. Friggen amazing. And poor Demyx T_T Why is everyone picking on him all the time? Now we know. Poor guy. Sorry for taking so ridiculously long to review all of these!

I need to write fast, then finish reading stuffs. HOLEY CRAPS, you told Lazard's deepest darkest secret! I loves it D And I love sarcastic Marluxia. Demyx's past is amazing! I wanna read more NAO! So I do that now.

-stares in disbelief
Your gonna bring in Namine?-jumps in the air and whoops for joy
for some reason I can't really see any story with KH in it and her not show up in any way, mind I don't actually go out of my way to read fics with her it in, but for some reason a little bug in the back of my brain won't completly allow for her to not be there even if just in mentioning-twirls arounf in little circles before resuming
I was begining to worry, it'd felt like forever since you last posted a story and out of sheer boredom I started rereading the story I think I got to somewhere around 30 before deciding to watch more recorded FF7 walkthrough someone posted on YuoTube, I've got over 50 30 minutue videos to watch the entire game off of _

Poor Demyx though first he gets all that bad news from Mansex then he passes out from an overload. and I must say I remember the part in KH2 where Roxas smashes the compy and I just loved it to pieces, teen anger is such a lovely thing...

so off on another note, how was your trip to France you meantioned? wish i could go overseas...

Mizu

O_O wow that was a turn I had not anticipated for this story

Demyx being turned into a Nobody on purpose, scary...

...damn I don't know what to write
guess I'll leave it at that..

oh I hope you had fun on your holiday to france _

Mizu

P.S. looking forward to the next chapter

first and formost, poor Danni T_T I can understand going through something similar, not that I've ever been preganat, but I have heaved till I was empty and I still kept going, it hurts after the first few minutes.-rubs circles on her back
but maybe you should try and get namine and roxas back together, it's be cute.

I am looking forward to when Zack goes to Hollow Bastion, I think it'll be very amusing.

still loving the story, and can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work!

Mizu