This is funny. Bravo!

I really like your story. _ Thank you for sharing it.

Beautiful. Simply perfect from beginning to end.

E! I can't even begin to tell you how much I love, love, love this story. I adore the interaction between the boys in here. I love "worry"-Yotan to bits. He's so adorable and huggable. And, Aya ... you know how I love him when he's all grumbly and battered. I think you've done a wonderful job capturing the boys' characters in here, as well as catching the feelings and emotions surrounding an incident such as this. Neither of them will come out and say it, but it's scary to come so close to losing someone you care about and all of that feeling is in here. Even if the boys don't speak the words out loud. I also love the symmetry in here, with the story starting out having Aya upset to be waking up in Yohji's bed and, then, in the end, giving him some measure of peace because that's where he is. Beautifully done, all around. I'm so glad you posted this one! Hugs!

I like!
Maybe Youji has all those pin-up girl posters in his room so that when he wakes up in the mornings, they'll make him forget about whatever nightmares HE's had.
Anyway, you did a great job...and I do love the Youji/Aya friendship dynamic.