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| Hinachan188 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abusegreat story lov it i see you kinda have a SnapeXHarry pairing going on here and i think you should contuine with it anyway plzs update soon |
| Brandir 2008-07-22 ch 10, | abusethis whole story is a giant soap opera with all the dramatic scenes of Harry crying, fainting, breakdowns, dissapearing, reunions. Every page is 'gasp' this and 'gasp' that. BUT it's a GREAT read! It keeps me hanging! |
| puretsubasa 2008-07-22 ch 10, | abuseI love this story! Keep it going~! |
| jabarber69 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseHey I just read the last two chapters, sorry but been busy! anyway ole harry sure is messed up aint he! like the classroom stuff with hermione and all and laughed my arse off couple of times especially after his father asked him how he conjured the goblet and pineapple juice! |
| Wise Pallas Athena 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseGreat story! I love stories where Harry is a prodigy! Will you explain why he associates white with his 'carer'? Anyway I would love to praise your story more but it's 5:33 in the morning, I thing I'm going to bed, I just couldn't stop reading;) Please update soon! Athena |
| Wise Pallas Athena 2008-07-21 ch 8, | abuseGreat story! I'm gonna read the rest in a moment I just want to mention: You made a mistake concerning the parselmouth-parseltongue issue: “I can speak to snakes, I’m a Parseltongue.” Harry said loudly and clearly. Uncle Remus was smiling proudly at him, the other three men were staring and his Mother was looking contemplative. “Are you really a Parselmouth Harry?” came a soft voice from the doorway. The first time it has to be 'I'm a parselmouth' or 'I can speak parseltongue. It's not a flame or anything, I'm just plain annoying and here on this earth to enjoy your stories and post reviews with annoying corrections in them:P My life story:P So amusing. Athena |
| Impius 2008-07-21 ch 10, | abuseErm...other than Harry being a bit of a cryer, I'm enjoying this story. Continue! |
| CatWriter 2008-07-18 ch 10, | abusevery nice chapter, more please. Have you seen those cell phone cards, that let you connect through the internet through a cell phone connection, the card is the cell phone, maybe you should try that? I priced the at&t one, and it's about $60 a month. well, just an idea. Good story, I'm really glad that harry and his mom is bonding. Sev in a way is getting the family with lily he always wanted, james and sirius still have some growing up to do, and Remus... well he's remus. Good work. Catwriter |
| imgonnadie 2008-07-17 ch 10, | abuseExcellent chapter |
| Future-Little-Mrs.-Teddy-Lu... 2008-07-17 ch 10, | abuseaaw! Harry really cares for Forest & Ice. Cute! |
| Crazym0i 2008-07-17 ch 10, | abusenice (: |
| Yukiren-chan 2008-07-17 ch 10, | abuseFantastic story! i read it up to here in one go ^-^ i love this Harry he's so cute, and severus is good in this story too, i think he deserves someone who needs him, and Harry is so cute when he goes to him. The relationsips develop really well with harry and his family , especially lilly atm. I'd like Remus to have a bigger role cos he's the most sensible marurder, and would be good for harry to talk to. (i'm not trying to tell you wht to write sorry it was just an idea!) keep writing! thanks Yukiren-chan xx |
| Alorkin 2008-07-16 ch 10, | abuseWhy do I get the feeling that Sirius and Harry;s familiars aren't going to get along? Severus is a strange twist and none of the Marauders are prepared for his odd change in attitude. Since none of the know of his past life they cannot know of the similarity between him and Harry. Tobias was just as bad as Vernon, if not worse. I can understand their apprehension. I'd pay money to see a snake hauling a book! An interesting filler. As before, eagerly await the next one. Alorkin |
| PenRifle 2008-07-16 ch 10, | abuseI have often wished I could vomit blood on command, and he gets to do it all the time. *petulant* |
| wickedlfairy17 2008-07-16 ch 10, | abuseDon't you listen to the haters! I personally love your work and can't wait to read more from you! You're doing an amazing job! =P |