Penis.

I love this so much. Catman made my life. And this story actually came in handy, since I'm currently writing a fanfic offline (supersecretZOMG) and your story helped me realize just how corny overdone it is. You're an inspiration to writers everywhere)

OMG this is sooo damn funny xD For some reason I pmsl at Catman. Yeah, I'm weird like that. And it's like 1:30am. LOL JK IT'S 1:28. Anyways yeah this is so damn funny, idc if I've already said that, it is. Deal with it. I've never laughed so much at a fanfic, haha Good job. You need to continue it or else I shall murder you.)

Oh so awesome.

DAMN IT! I WANTED TO WIN!1!1!1!

I love this chapter SO much..It actualy hurts. *emotear*gets down on one knee* Will you..will you marry me?*lol*

This chapter was ALMOST as (SUPERHOTOMG) as Kenny's face!

Oh, and MY dividers are super original!*lol*

LOLOLOL OMG I LOVE IT LOLLOLO

Hahahahahaha. I love this.

I'm quite amused by this story. I know somebody else had a fic where the first chapter parodied Mary Sue, which was kind of similar, but this goes into more depth with it. It's really funny.
Also, I'm loving the little Damien/Pip sidestory. Very awesome.

Love you, love your story! Good job, can't wait for the next chapter!

OMG! You used MY idea of misspelling the names, so I should get something speshul by default! Right?

Although the review window is mocking me by saying, "it is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved", I'm sorry, but I seriously can't think of anything that should be corrected. Hmm... It was amusing to see Stan so jealous, maybe he should continue that and take it to the extreme? :D Oh, and the minor characters need to be skipped more. They aren't interesting anyway, because the readers only care about the love story between Stan and Kyle. Totally.

Keep writing, I'm eagerly waiting to see where this all will lead

Ahh! It's so cliche that I made a loud noise in the library! But at the same time it's so great... When you put up the first chapter of this I didn't think you were gonna keep it up but I'm really glad you did!

Sorry for giving you really lame reviews for you awesome stories.

"because, well, he’s always been a total slut like that." The first line that made me laugh. Like REALLY laugh. Hard. I think there were about 6 more. This is freakin' HILARIOUS!

Not only are you parodying mary-sue stories, but you're also using wordplay with TYPOS(Catman...) and mocking certain things that are actually IN the show! (Red Racer only being on at Craig's house. Other than that... you've got Terrence Phillip or the news.
Really a good story. Good job... and I think Forts would be a lovely name for a child... but seriously my real first name is Jordan. Works for a boy and girl so you wouldn't have to worry about the gender of you're baby. I'm a girl... in case you forgot. *shrug
Actually forget what I said about my real first name. A kid named Forts would be awesomazing. ROFL

OMG.

omg.

Love.

Mary Sues full name was so funny I spat tea all over myself (I'm so fecking british. No joke. Alohamora.
But the"...Catman?“Oh. Sorry. Typo.
bit had me in stitches.

Major Kudos and cookies and socks and whaever else you youngins hanker after these days.

Julzi x

Aww, damn there have already been 22 reviews... Do I still get something special? PLEASE?
OK so I read this when it first came out, but for some reason I didn't review... I like it, making fun of the cliches is always fun. Keep going with it!