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| narutogirl101 2008-08-16 ch 2,  | abuseI've never seen this pairing befor,Truly awsome,this was a great story.but it's kinda hard to read when it's bunched up,but i liked it,nice job! |
| kisafan 2008-05-22 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat story helped a lot, thanks. I just had a grandma die and your story helped me out. |
| kisafan 2008-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool format, it sort emphasised the point... (Holey cow I sound like an english teacher) ...but it is an awsome plot. I know your probably long done with this fan fic but I just wanted to say Thanks for making my day. |
| BlackButterfly-RedRose 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseI love this! I dont like that Itachi-kun died (yeah yeah im an Itachi fangirl, get used to it) and how it was formatted, but i could care less about that. It was really adorable, especialy the part when Kisame helped Sakura with that little kid ^-^ |
| Gaaraluvababe 2008-04-22 ch 2, | abuseits amazin! i love it |
| Jen 2008-04-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis seems like it could be a very good fic, but the format makes it too hard to read. It would be easier to read if there were space between the paragraphs, and it wasn't all pushed to one side. |
| Dragon'sHost 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseUnbelievably cute! This is a great two-shot. |
| Killergirl01 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abusewow. that was so sweet. great story. |
| Dragon'sHost 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty good. Very original. I look forward to your next update. |
| M-Mello 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story, and your idea is unique! The only thing I have bad to say is the way you formated the story. I don't think it happened on purpose, but next time, it'll be more easy on the eyes if you could put them together in paragraphs. Please and Thankyou! Keep up the great work, and update soon! M-Mello |
| crazysmile15 2008-04-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was well writ in! Mokana-chan knows how to correct quite accurately. I hope you update soon! |
| NicNackers Inc. 2008-04-14 ch 1, | abusewow i relly liked it, and the couple is so cute! i ust didnt like the paragraphs all squished to oneside, but i cant wait for part 2! |
| Kitty 2008-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat Story! Hate what happened to Naruto & Ino & all but Love how you made Kisame save Sakura! Please hurry up & install the next chapter! Oh & hurry & knock-off Orochimaru! Bye! |
| Ralf Jones 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseNice chapter! I hope to see more soon! |