 Truly Deceived 2009-08-29 . chapter 2You have got to update! I love this new Hinata being brought out! nd now when she finally stands up to her father YOUR not UPDATING! arggh!! *pouts* plz update? |
 Rakero-chan 2008-08-10 . chapter 2pleasepleaseplease continue! I love this story! The plot is so cute and it's really funny. |
 alwaysNaruHina 2008-06-27 . chapter 2I still wondering where this story are going to go, I am curious what will happen next after Hinata going home. I'm glad Hinata become stronger with Sasuke's help. I wish their relationship getting better. hope you update soon, ja ne! |
 zoloo 2008-06-07 . chapter 2 PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 DeathandLove 2008-06-06 . chapter 2Great story...
I can not wait to see what happens next^_^ |
 stphne 2008-06-01 . chapter 2Dear. Lord.
Your story is...amazing. I swear. I can only aspire to create something as wonderful as this. I am forever in love with this story, no matter where you take it. Only one thing I found wrong was a tense confusion in the second chapter, but it could just be the way you wanted to write the sentence. It wasn't very big. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Amerius 2008-06-01 . chapter 2aww! I really loved Sasuke's pancake idea, and your writing style is totally awesome!
I wonder what Hiashi's going to do, too! So far it's great, and I liked the encounters Sasuke and Hinata have gone through.
Oh, and the grass. Definitely the grass part. |
 Kunoichi_BlackRose 2008-05-27 . chapter 2 WHOOT! GOO HINA-CHAN! hiashi can be such a jerk. bleh.
but anyway, SASUHINA RULES! |
 kidscanfly 2008-05-25 . chapter 2I love this so much! I really enjoy the quality of your work; you do a marvelous job. Please continue soon :) |
 cherrypudding 2008-05-22 . chapter 2you are joking...no!!
please update!! i need to know what happens next!!
aarggh! this is so kawaii!
i love how you havent rushed Hinata's confidence nor the relationship, and you have kept the storyline relevant.
luv it.
UPDATE! |
 nadakesgurl 2008-05-22 . chapter 2i love ur story!! =)
one question though, how old are Sasuke and Hinata in here? |
 HeartBrokenHinata 2008-05-21 . chapter 2OMG go Hinata |
 suuuy 2008-05-21 . chapter 2When I first saw the Sasuke x Hinata pairing, I was afraid it'd be a shallow mary-sue, but you did really well with this. The pairing is justified, and not rushed. And this second chapter- Hinata's thoughts/actions mixing with her dreams- creates a nice head-in-the-clouds effect. Sometimes, though, the dialogue seems to stilted- like movie scripts; I can't imagine this actually ever happening. But then again, that's why it's called fanfiction, right? ;) *sigh* if only real life were like fiction. . . |
 Night Beauty 2008-05-21 . chapter 2Go Hinata! XD |
 jjayno1 2008-05-21 . chapter 2that truely did not feel like 10,0 words...went alot quicker than expected- so pe'd off you ended it there, she finally got an attitude. I found the first chapter hard to understand at times because of lack of explaination but it got loads better the more it went on. Im definately looking forward to the next one-im really hoping hina kicks his ass (but i dought that will happen any time soon--) |