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| The Fink 2008-04-17 ch 1,  | abuseNow this I really like. You've captured Edward wonderfully and filled in the backstory beautifully. I'm also liking the little hints you're layering in for Matthew's story - I'd be interested to see you take that on further. All in all, a really, really good job. Thank you :) |