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| XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-06-15 ch 7,  | abuseHi! A nice chapter! Two things that I noticed though, “YOU HAVE TO BREAK A WHOLE IN THE FLOOR!” I believe that should be HOLE not WHOLE. Luffy was struggling ubderneath Zoros weight Another spelling error. It's underneath, not ubderneath. But otehr than those two errors, I liked this chapter a lot! Poor Luffy, they think that he's crazy! I look forward to the next chapter! ~MewPirate~ |
| waver-chan 2008-06-15 ch 7, | abuseit's okay...this chappy was fun and short. i like it^^ ideas ideas ideas...next island,do something like...have luffy guard the ship and listen to the voice...i'm not good idea person^^' |
| Wizle 2008-05-31 ch 6, | abuseHI like your story and Bec she is cool and crazy i like her keep writing I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS SO PLEASE CONTINUE |
| TheAntelopicNatureGirl.Says... 2008-05-28 ch 6, | abuseGLENNA! that flame did NOT hurt mah brain (WHICH I DO SO HAVE!) because i knew it was u so there! grr i was there when u wrote it! tsk tsk tsk mWE HE HE |
| dragon867553 2008-05-27 ch 1, | abusebec. flame to hurt ur brain. if you have one. ur story was so gay i couldn't even read it. i had to skip to the bottom. did you find ur shoe or is there a dead person in ur closet? |
| IzzyoftehRandomanius 2008-05-27 ch 6, | abuseI had an image of zoro who looked like girr going 'I think ill just roll around on the floor. Hmm..hmm.hmm.' Hehe ~Iz (Jashin is my God) had 2 add dat |
| XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseHmm, maybe Zoro isn't going to let her starve. Nice chapter. |
| Sable Blackrose 2008-05-25 ch 6, | abuseOh my freaking god you are so FUNNY! Why are you so funny?! Why aren't I that funny?! *throws temper tantrum and pouts* Nah, just kidding. About wanting to be funny. Anyways, Tang sounds pretty cool. Also sounds sorta familiar. Don't ask why. Perhaps was heard of in another life? *begins to muse* I have an idea for your next update. Not for Sanji and Zoro's conversation, though. You could have a chapter where Bec acts calm and composed for a little while but can't hold it in and EXPLODES (not literally). Keep up the great work! You bring happiness and laughter into my boring and monotonous life : ) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . perhaps TOO much . . . . . . . . |
| Sable Blackrose 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseCICADA'S SHALL RULE THE WORLD! Lol ah. . . . . . . you're far too funny. So far I've only read the first chapter, but I cannot wait to read more! In which I will do right this second! |
| The Ia Chan 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseo! How interesting! I shall read more later! Hum hum hum... |
| XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-05-17 ch 5, | abuseSilly Bec. Honestly, I am HOOKED on thi story! |
| Oki-chwan 2008-05-17 ch 5, | abuseWHOOHOO! New chappy!! Love the zoro chase scenes! |
| IzzyoftehRandomanius 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseHey becca-chan! YOu know that sanji means 3o'clock? well yesh tis i the fantabulous IZZY! hyper moment. bwip hehe. PANTS. ok ill stop now. buh bye iz |
| XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-04-26 ch 4, | abuseAwesome! A double update! I love those. Poor Bec. Oh no, wait. It's not bad that she has to kiss Zoro. I wish he was real. *Sigh* |
| XxStrawberryKittyxX 2008-04-26 ch 3, | abuseOoh, Truth or Dare! Must see what happens next. |